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Guest chapter 1 . 2/15
I thought it was a very good peice especially for it beoing your very first one
Vero chapter 1 . 2/8
He put is HAND in is vagina and she was in pain afte he put is penis in is vagina? Ahahahah love the logic
LemonyNaruHina chapter 1 . 12/1/2014
How come that his fist be inside a virgin without the pain? Seriously? That could already take her virginity fyi. -.- anyways it was a hot lemon. It was good
Guest chapter 1 . 9/19/2014
Hinata be like OH SHIIII-
Naruto fan chapter 1 . 4/28/2014
Y cant I've a dream like that?BTW, nice going.
Ada chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
nice and sexy
Guest chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
TWIST ENDING! WOOT WOOT!
I'mTheCoolest chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
There is no way he could fit that many fingers in her and she still react like that to his "manhood"! She would have to either be a serious hoe or massive masturbator to have him fit his fingers that way! and if so, she wouldn't have her hymen/cherry! Over use of some comments such as "get/getting used to it".
pickled chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
The grammar and spelling needs some work
Redheadking chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
That was a sweet ichi short-story. I will be looking for more.
naruhina fan chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
The best lemon i ever read! Can u write about sasusaku? Pls i would love to read that :)
DASvicks63 chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
That was hot you should do another
Narutohinata4e chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
I loved it. you shut writhe more story like that.
Godschildtweety chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
real good
AmazingBlaze101 chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
Wipes away nose-bleed we will never speak of this again lol jk love itttt
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