Reviews for Moments
xLilly White chapter 28 . 8/2/2008
WOOHOO! JessiexCloud! You never see this kind of candy on this site, damnit! And you have their impossible relationship down-pat in just a couple of words, once again ;D It's been an eternity since I read your open, refreshing works, and I can't say it did much good to my mental state to be away from your style for such a while xD Honestly... I've been reading the crappiest kind of crap lately (the stories are good but the style, the style!) so reading this after so long, and finding all the old characters again, and your old taste for interesting couples, and how you manage to make them work... I'll never get enough of it, I promise you- it's simply impossible. And, I like how you integrated Tseng in the story. Who can resist him, the cold-hearted man who deals death as though it didn't mean a thing? :)

Nice little peek into Jessie's past, too. You never really wonder where they all come from, the other AVALANCHE members- and being the only woman, you obviously have a weakness for Jessie, and how between her and Cloud there's this spark of tenderness that doesn't go unnoticed in the game. Overall, very nicely rendered! You're still just as good as all those weeks ago xD Hugs!
City of Dis chapter 28 . 8/2/2008
wow...that was better than i could have hoped for...considering the info i got you...

that was about the most realistic version that i believe could have happened could have happened!

really a great job! Keep it up!

you do know about crisis core right? see if you can throw in a zackxcisseni or a cloudxcissnei ...unless you dont know who the hell im talkin which case just ignore said request...


Moonshine's Guide chapter 28 . 8/1/2008
I found this one depressing…

Very good… but very sad in a way…

Great job. Keep writing!
YinYangWhiteTiger chapter 28 . 8/1/2008
I know this may be eithe rude or stupid but i have other request

Pairing: Rude/Tifa (one-sided)

Rating: T

Theme: Rude always looked at her and would always defend her only knowing she didn't need or knew he ever wanted her.

Characters in: Rude, Tifa, cloud, merlene, danzel, reno, elena

second request


Rating: T/M

Theme: He was a second class soldier, he was a the presdinet to be of a father who could care him better off dead, Rufus was lost and angry while a man only 4 years older showed(or tried) him the way back to his place only to get lost in the way.

Characters: Rufus/Zack, Sephiroth, Genesis, Angeal, Tseng, Cinssei, reno, (New recuit) Rude and possible anybody else...

IMPORTANT:"What is the price of Freedom? What's the differents between and Human and a Monster? Did you by any chance seel your soul cheaply?" Somebody must say it or Rufus or Zack must think it or say it outloud.

I'm sorry if this is bothering
LastTrojanNight chapter 27 . 7/21/2008
Aw, Rude is so dedicated! *tear* It's absolutely touching.
Inspiral chapter 27 . 7/21/2008
You should do more RenoxRude. lol But, really, that was ever so touching. 5/5
Moonshine's Guide chapter 27 . 7/21/2008
It was sweet.

Not overly fond of this pairing, but meh. It was well written… I won't complain.

Element's Sole Protector chapter 26 . 6/25/2008

I LOVE Cloud/Tifa way too much. Thanks so much for alerting me...and thank God I found it in the swamp my Inbox has become...
Tangled Vines chapter 26 . 6/22/2008
Wow, I'd never consider Cloud's reason for leaving like that before, I should have, but I didn't.


Silly me.

Oh well. I loved this.
Tangled Vines chapter 16 . 6/22/2008
I liked it - with Rufus and his power desire to possess her, while Elena was softer but more freespirited. The love/hate concepts were lovely.

LastTrojanNight chapter 26 . 6/21/2008
Aw, nice description of poor lil’ Clouds angstful thoughts!

We all know his thoughts run along the lines of “..angstangstangst..” anyways :p

Poor baby -cuddles plushie-
City of Dis chapter 26 . 6/21/2008
these are all really good!

hey you need to do a know from the original avalance! shes cool and i think if she hadn't died her and cloud might have got something on...hey theres always a chance right?

anyway keep up!
Moonshine's Guide chapter 26 . 6/21/2008
Bad Cloud! *squirts him with water*

You're supposed to stay Emo Boy… gr…

Anyways… good chapter. KEEP WRITING!
Moonshine's Guide chapter 25 . 6/19/2008
The ending was sad… but otherwise, it was very very good.

Um… I can't think of anything else to say…

LastTrojanNight chapter 25 . 6/19/2008
Aw, Zack and Aer are so sweet! Now I feel all warm and fuzzy inside
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