|Reviews for Healing Suki|
| inklaced chapter 20 . 7/18/2015
i feel that you could have incorporated that first deleted scene about zuko with mai's knife. i think that it would have fit in quite well if the scene showed zuko's empathy towards suki's confusion about her love for sokka because zuko himself was slightly messed up about mai. to be honest, i preferred your other story, 'from mori to smellerbee', as i felt that that was more realistic and a more accurate portrayal of the main character's feelings and it was also enhanced by the situation around them. keep up the good work!
| ennaj60 chapter 20 . 7/1/2012
great story :]
| Guest chapter 20 . 6/27/2012
The story as a whole was very well written and I think, realistic to how tormented the prison would have left Suki. It is also realistic in the sense that she has the scars to prove what happened...no one goes through that kind of capture and imprisonment without having something to show for it at the end.
I liked all the little stories running alongside too; Toph's jealousy but also grudging acceptance of how Suki and Sokka feel for each other, The Duke's back story, how she developed a comradeship with Zuko and all the other little 'friendshipy' moments you only really ever see in the background.
This is the best story I have read in a long time...it's amazing :) It has also helped me lay some ghosts to rest so thank you for that and I will continue to read your stories! x
| Patz1989 chapter 20 . 4/5/2011
this was a really good story :) I couldnt ask for a better one..to me I really cant think of anythign that needs to be changed..it is awesome the way it is!~!
| xxxZutaraxxx chapter 20 . 6/18/2009
I love this story! You have to write more like this!
| Churnok chapter 20 . 9/20/2008
Some of your deleted scenes were amusing. I hope you rework them so they fit into future stories. The scene with Sokka pumping Katarra for information on Suki could almost be a story in its own right.
| Churnok chapter 19 . 9/20/2008
Some minor typos here and there, but otherwise a very touching story. You're the first author I've read so far that has thought to develop minor Avatar characters like The Duke.
I liked the subtle ways to pointed out Toph's crush on Sokka. Suki's attacks on Ty Lee because of her crush on Sokka was also amusing, though the fight itself left some story problems, in my opinion. I realize it was just to sow distrust between Zuko and the others, But I don't see Azula just attacking once and then not coming back to level the place. Basic pest control, remove the nest.
Please don't beg for reviews in your author notes. I know you love getting them. I love getting them too but begging for them, and holding the next chapter until you get a quota of them, can be insulting to your readers. Particularly those who are unfamiliar with your work.
Again, good story. Now, on to your deleted scenes!
| MastaDrumma22 chapter 18 . 8/31/2008
Zuko and The Duke freinds? Friends or Acquaintances? lol. Inside joke. Hmm nice twist. I can't believe that Sokka would stay there w/ Suki while she was telling him to get out. Wow, that could have turned out badly though. Normally, I don't think people would have stayed there, but nice.
| MastaDrumma22 chapter 17 . 8/31/2008
Kohana? I've heard that name before... nice update.
| MastaDrumma22 chapter 15 . 8/25/2008
Platonic? Damn. jk. Nice chap.
| AshZaku chapter 20 . 8/7/2008
Beautiful Fic, I just made certain that you were on my author alert so that I know when you write your next fic. You really are a gifted writer, and I hope to see alot more from you in the future.
| AshZaku chapter 19 . 8/7/2008
Wow, this chapter, and the entire fic, was really amazing. You should totally do a sequel or something of the final battle(but do it better than the "real" finale, with Ozai dieing at least P). I know I'd read it!
Thanks so much for a beautiful story.
| AshZaku chapter 18 . 8/7/2008
Aw, the great Sukka romance never fails.
Wonderful writing, Suki is REALLY believable, especially since she's been through so much. Really looking forward to this last chap!
| AshZaku chapter 17 . 8/7/2008
NO! Poor Suki! *cry*
| AshZaku chapter 16 . 8/7/2008
Wow, this chapter was sad and wonderful, even though it was kinda short \, about to read the finale, and I'm really excited! )