Reviews for Goodbye Love
Ginger Glinda the Tangerine chapter 7 . 3/28/2008
Oh the tragicness... XP

I think you should do more with the whole Maureen thing. Like, why did she do that? O_O and Roger has to find out about Mimi. Otherwise I'm coming to your house and kicking you in the pants. XD
Goldilocks V.2 is an angel chapter 2 . 3/28/2008
Three problems:

Mark nor Rodger ever answer the phome. I doubt a habit like that would change.

Obviously, the Life Café isn't affordable to everyone because the guy said that they couldn't pay, they just hung out there, and he was getting annoyed.

That group, the way you describe them, is very submissive. That is not the case in the movie/play. They just barge their way in.

Granted, things could've changed since the death of Angel, but I doubt they would've changed that much.

~ Alee

PS - It's toward, not towards. You can only go one direction at a time and therefore, it is not plural.
Goldilocks V.2 is an angel chapter 1 . 3/28/2008
Not as much description as I would've liked, but still a good start.

Am I missing something in the movie/play that says April committed suicide? I just picture it differently.
xemily33091 chapter 7 . 3/28/2008
I love this, good job. I can't wait for you to update )
Ginger Glinda the Tangerine chapter 6 . 2/23/2008
Aww adorable much? Hehe, Mark's totally Maureen's bitch... It was so perfect how you got them back together! It was noce to have somethng light and fluffy like this amidst all the death and disease...
Rose DiVerona chapter 6 . 2/22/2008
Aww...I love Mark and Maureen. :) Fluffy!
Eilasor Nelluc chapter 5 . 2/15/2008
This is really good. I want more!
Ginger Glinda the Tangerine chapter 5 . 2/14/2008
You know, there is such a thing as too much depression. This, however, had just enough!

I was beginning to suspect that you might give Maureen AIDS too. But why did Joanne leave her? After everything you said about Joanne being more loving around Maureen (yay for that, btw!)? Not fair!

Oh, and yay for the MarkMaureen friendship! Can you say adorable? I sure can!
TechnicolorZebra chapter 3 . 2/9/2008
NO! You can't kill COllins! Great story though, continue!
Ginger Glinda the Tangerine chapter 4 . 2/6/2008
Grr... Benny...

Why is it that a funeral can never go right over there? Stupid Benny. *grumble*

This was so well written, love, all the little details like Collins wearing such a non-Collinsy outfit and the song not being right were so heartbreaking.

I also loved the way Mark was thinking about his fate being life after all his friends leave him. I think it's an important part of his character and one that is sorely unexplored, so well done you, my dear!

The only thing I don't like about this story is the fact that you portray Joanne as so cold and somewhat heartless. I know she doesn't know the others as well, or hasn't known them for as long, but I don't think she's that cruel! Unless she's just acting that way because she's afraid of showing any emotion, a la Tracie Thoms in the finale of the RENT movie, but if that's the case you could... I don't know, explain it a bit more or something...

Wow, this review is long. Hehe... I better stop now...
lotrelves chapter 3 . 1/31/2008
;-; That brought me to tears...SO SAD BUT SO WELL-WRITTEN.
Ginger Glinda the Tangerine chapter 3 . 1/29/2008
NO!

You... He... They... You...

*sob*

You're really mean, love.

But really, really talented.
Ginger Glinda the Tangerine chapter 2 . 1/26/2008
Aww no! They still have issues, even after the finale of the show? And I thought that was meant to be all life-affirming and stuff...

My, my, honey, this is gonna be so depressing... I don't know if I can stand to read it, but I will! Because it's awesome! And... other things that mean awesome! I love your writing style, it's not too bland but it's not weighed down with too much extra detail.

There were a couple of places where the punctuation gnomes stole your commas and full stops, but aside from that this was really neat! I can't wait for more!