|Reviews for Mind worms and peace talks|
| ChocolateTeapot chapter 1 . 9/8
Alpha Centauri fanfiction is always cool and I like the title.
The faction leaders don't really need an introduction, particularly not a one line note about their function aboard the Unity.
The Unity is a name, so it should be capitalised. Also, the faction leaders are correctly spelt Zakharov, Deirdre and Sheng-ji.
I'd have labelled this story as humour or parody. For straight up drama, it's a bit too over the top, but as a parody it works well.
I like the ending.
| mordenkainen yaga chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
| aikakone chapter 1 . 8/1/2008
My first-read AC fic. Love the game. The dialogue could be fleshed out. Not everyone likes straight dialogue. That stated, I was amused at Santiago (the character I most often play) in all caps.
| Robespeire chapter 1 . 5/21/2008
Not very good
| lordzand chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
If it was meant to be funny, you did great. If not, it was funny. I loved it all, just wished it was longer.
| Spellspinner777 chapter 1 . 1/29/2008
Your here! Yay!
I really liked it. You have introduced the characters well, without to much babble and the entire thing reads fantastically well. It is very fluid and just rolls infront of the eyes. I really like the way you write and I really hope you keep up this high standard as this fic needs to be regularly maintained.