Reviews for What Was Your Reward
CrimsonAngel13 chapter 1 . 9/11/2016
Loved it! I actually cried a little when Jack was on his death bed.
Brother Rafen chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
I loved it! It was beautiful and really captured the way the little sisters might have turned out
ProjectXanatos chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
Holy... crap. That was very well written, and I must say I like the way you portrayed Jack's character. Great job!
brainamp chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
I like this story. It made me feel sad in a good way
Alex K 47 chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
Very Nice. Loved it. Realistic yet keeps the characters alive. I always wondered what the story was behind the good ending. I can accept this one.
firefox999 chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
I think the quote was Shakespeare. meh, anyway, I think this was written quite well and you did a great job conveying the emotion.
Deleted6581 chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
Beautiful. This story, while improvements can be made is epic. They will write books on the epicness of this epic and you will make a fortune on it.
Dragon Lord Coker chapter 1 . 11/24/2008
Shadeslayer60 chapter 1 . 11/9/2008
man this story was amazing and the quote was from julios (i think thats how you spell it)ceasar
Exilo chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
That was very touching. I'm actually holding back tears, because its such a touching, sad, emotional ending in the game, and you've captured that same tragic yet hopeful tone in this well. I would think that putting words to the extreme visualness of the game, something would be lost, but this is powerful. My only complaint would be that you focused slightly too much on Richard instead of the Sisters. It feels like Rachel should have told the story of Jack, not Richard, to the children. But all and all, a touching fic. And Shakespeare said the quote i believe.

R.I.P. Jack. Now where's my cookie?
Anastasia Kaliska Dyani Malfoy chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
That was just awesome. I absolutely loved it. It's like you took the game and just added on what could have happened afterward. It almost made me cry and now I have to go kill some splicers to make myself feel better. Thanks for the awesome story. You should write one pairing Jack and Bridgette together. Even though Jack is technically two...we won't get into that though. n.n
IamACritic chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
i like this story.
The Eternal Winter chapter 1 . 6/14/2008
Incredible.I wish this had been the good really made me feel feelings for the first time in good job.
Vegetto800 chapter 1 . 6/7/2008
One of the best one-shots I have read in a while.

I hope to see more works from you in the future.

Sheepicus Matticus chapter 1 . 4/2/2008
This story was so good! Ah, I loved it! Definitely going on my favorites.
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