Reviews for Memories of Innocence
Arisa-san chapter 1 . 1/25/2008
So cute! please continue this! now for the criticism: it would be nice if you could say who is saying what once in a while, because it gets kind of confusing!

anyway...i loved it! And i read . . review, and its true! Why did all that stuff have to happen between them! I hate orochimaru and itachi!(well, itachi not so much...::drools::)

man, the things i could do with a death note...

Keep writing!

-Arisa-sama chapter 1 . 1/25/2008
Gosh, this story, though cute has reduced me to tears! ::laughs::

When I read this I couldn't help but think of all the shit that happened to them afterwards, it makes me curse Orochimaru and Itachi...and it makes me wish that Sasuke didn't have to leave.

They were SO cute when they were younger, weren't they? ::giggles::

Haha, their determination and joy once they got the apple made me laugh...they got so worked up over something so small! But that's Team 7 for you, so dramatic! ::laughs::

Very cute oneshot.

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ClarkX100 chapter 1 . 1/25/2008
Well I hate getting reviews without some kind of criticism so here goes, don't hate me. You kind of neglected any use of ninja techniques at all. Any one of then should've been able to reach it on their own just by jumping.
RK-Striker-JK-5 chapter 1 . 1/25/2008
That was very sweet, and great. More stories should be like this.