Reviews for Moving Forward Series Part 00 Prologue
Kitty Invictus chapter 2 . 6/21/2010
You shouldn't have to defend your choice to include this. It is very deep and the personal experience only adds to the writing. If the rest of the series is this good I can't wait to continue.

This was very honest and I loved it. never compromise your writing because you think someone will not like it.
123-321 chapter 2 . 6/10/2009
incredibly well done
Shawntail chapter 2 . 4/14/2009

cheri1 chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
Wow! Interesting! This looks like a fascinating series!
LoveSlashAngst chapter 1 . 2/28/2008

Your last five lines pulled me in like nothing else.

I'll bet I get 3 guesses you the stunningly handsome young man is, and the first two don't count?

JeMS7 chapter 1 . 2/21/2008
You are an artist. I would've loved to see this on film. It was that great. I honestly wish we could see this.
GM Andy chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
Interesting. Very interesting.

The prime beings playing a game for the destiny of the universe.

Yes, I can see this.

The main questions I have I'm sure will be revealed in the rest of the series.

The writing is clean and very well done. The setup is quite nice.

So off to the other parts I go...
MythStar Black Dragon chapter 1 . 1/29/2008
Whoa was good intresting.