Reviews for 12 Hour Hero's Trial
Kiptin chapter 1 . 11/1/2013
I really wanted to read this, but the bold italic font made it too hard to read. Could you change the formatting to normal text?
Alexbelieverinfate chapter 1 . 3/10/2006
I liked this story, i don't think the portrayal of Luka's character was overly accurate. Yet it wasn't completly out of character. The story line itself was intense, it kept me hooked the whole time.

Your a great writer and you could take this fic and your writing further.
Becky chapter 1 . 7/8/2003
heya! that was so gd i loved the ending huge carby fan ! i kno u wrote it like 2 yrs ago but if u r ever thinkin bout a sequal wuld love to read it :D
freebie chapter 1 . 3/2/2003
you would not believe how many times i have read this story, it is so good! and i don't normally read er.
Em4 chapter 1 . 8/8/2002
I've read this one so many times on The Lounge but I've never reviewed it so I thought I would now. I love it so much (which explains the re-reading)! It is well written and so sweet. Great.
suzuki bob chocorazgurl chapter 1 . 3/22/2002
awesome story! can you write a sequel if you haven't already?
baby jen chapter 1 . 9/24/2001
ur a fab writer
solojones chapter 1 . 9/20/2001
thanks for the reviews guys! And to those who didn't like it and thought it was one sided... hi Luby's and Jinters, thanks for reviewing :grin:. As my friend and I would say, "There's nothing wrong with having your own opinion. There's just something wrong with you." lol :) j/k. Carrot Power.
aWittyFool chapter 1 . 9/17/2001
Im apalled that Luka would do such a thing... Good fic.
Susan chapter 1 . 9/17/2001
What a heart warming story! Very well written! I just wanted to mention that when an addict is seriously injured there's no need for him to suffer. There's a non-narcotic drug called Toradol that is pretty effective! If it isn't enough they can go ahead and use a narcotic along with naltrexone. It stops the pain but doesn't bring back the craving. I know this because I'm a recovering addict. I was addicted to prescription pain killers for a very long time. I have been in recovery for three years now.
Raine3 chapter 1 . 9/16/2001
Rachel! this is ! Rainey says so, so it is so. :grin:
Rob5 chapter 1 . 9/16/2001
Love this. Superb stuff :)
Chasing Liquor chapter 1 . 9/15/2001
Reeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaalllllll sappy. However, that's not always bad. It wasn't in this case. This story was a nice escape from reality for a little while. Nice work.
calendaes chapter 1 . 9/15/2001
I liked it. And, yes it was a little one-sided, but I didn't think it was totally out of the realm of possibility for Luka's character. He does have a temper and if he thought that Abby was in any danger or being kissed unwillingly, he would step in. People are tense right now, but fanfiction is a's not real violence and I, for one, enjoyed escaping into a world untouched by the events of the past few days. You are a talented writer.
Andrea chapter 1 . 9/15/2001
I'm disgusted. So much violence the last days and I just read more violence in a fic. That triangle thing is ridiculous, but more ridiculous are all Carby and Luby writers who can't write a single piece of fic without making Luka or Carter looking as the bad guys.
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