Reviews for Her Pink Stilettos
qiarah chapter 3 . 8/20/2012
huey kno good and god damn well he wnted to take all of her right then an there
qiarah chapter 2 . 8/19/2012
i think huey was mad becuz riley put his arm aroung gwen not becuz of jazmine or it could be both who knows well time to read the last chapter i mean next chapter
qiarah chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
nice tory dude frfr
YungReezyFan chapter 6 . 7/23/2011
okay, I thought this story had potential with jazmine beating riley half to death and some oc character being the baddest MF alive I cant deal with this anymore, 1. Nobody punks Riley, 2. Nobody can whup Huey cuz he was a martial arts genius at ten, what makes u think he wud be anyless deadly and 3. none of the characters were acting like themselves accept maybe Huey... in closing dont ever make another Boondocks story again... God Bless you
mz.authenticredhead chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
im lovin the whole huey and gwen thing but i kinda feel bad for jaz but should i ? this story leaves me with wonders but i love it
SwagSammich78 chapter 2 . 2/7/2010
I laughed through this entire chapter (in a good way, of course).

On to the next one!

-Kelsey
SwagSammich78 chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
I know I'm hella late on reviewing these(that's what happens when you're sick, you start trying to find stuff to do. So you're probably going to get a lot of reviews today. haha) but the first thing I want to say is DON'T APOLOGIZE for your story "not being what everyone else likes". Girl, who cares? It's your story, your ideas, and you are allowed to like something others may not see the same way.

Plus, it's just a story. If people got that much of a problem with it they really must not have much sense.

And now that I'm done talking you to death, I love how Jazmine is crying all loud in the middle of the damn park about her dead dog, and Riley's laughing at her for it. That WOULD be something both of their crazy selves would do. It took me a minute to realize a couple of the parts were flashbacks because you didn't really do any kind of indication that they were, but I figured it out. There really weren't too many errors to whine about, since everyone makes the occasional mistake. Great first chapter :)

-Kelsey
misseylady chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
dat was real good im new 2 da website and i would love 4 u to give me sum pointers... like how u star lol
Dark Hinata14 chapter 9 . 1/18/2009
Review please hahah Riley got his butt kicked LOL
AubreighLovesTPain chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
The story was good! I can imagine Jazmine beating Riley with her stilettos! If you want, you can read my Riley fan fiction, it's called When Bre-Bre Met Riley. I'm about to update the story. I'll put a fifth chapter up in a few minutes. Review it please! I'd really appreciate it! I'm a Riley lover.
rileyxjazmine love forever chapter 9 . 5/3/2008
i like this alot and i love the drama plz continue
NewEraSenpai chapter 9 . 3/9/2008
Lengthy chapters are life...that was great. Very touching about Gwen's grandparents and I'm sorry to hear the situation with your grandparents. It might hurt, but just remember they're smilin down on you right now...but back to reviewing the chapter, the end kinda caught me off guard. I guess this counseling is doing a little TOO much. But I love how this is all comin' together now and good luck on your EXIT EXAM! BOONDOCKS FANFICTION UP ALL DAY...
Tani-Ni chapter 9 . 3/8/2008
oh! What is going 2 happen 2 these 4? I'm actually gettin ito this JazminexRiley concept...
Humb1eBeginnings chapter 9 . 3/8/2008
You're going to spoil me if you keep writing long chapters like this. This was good.

Finally you spark the new relationships off in a way.

That Huey/Gwen part was something. I was all up in the screen.

And That Riley/Jazmine part was tight.

I like where this going.

And I had to take thew grad exams to.

I had to take history, reading, and english.

And i had to take the writing assessment.

So yea. Good job though.
marsiana del martes chapter 4 . 3/6/2008
well i figured it out its jaz and riley and gwen and huey not my fav couple but that ok i just wont read anymore good story though keep going others like
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