|Reviews for Heartbroken|
| Bloomrini chapter 1 . 3/7
although i prefer happy endings
but i ve to say that the twist was marvelous..
| chantpleure chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
best plot twist ever!
| LoriAnnRut chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
A little too sad for me.
| RaeMazerolle chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
I'm bawling my eyes out right now. How utterly tragic. You kept him perfectly in character, it was amazing.
| LadyStiff chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
This was so amazing! You really got me going there for awhile. I really thought you were talking about Tonks. I should have known. There's no way Remus would refuse Hermione ;-).
Very beautifully written and Rumus was just fantastic..
| Midnight Mahogany chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
I loved the unexpected twist that it was Hermione who died and Tonks who came into the room.
You got the emotions right and I don't think the characters are that OOC.
So good work, great oneshot.
| roxyrainbow chapter 1 . 9/18/2010
oh my you tricked not usually so easily fooled! i really loved this. beautiful and sad
| booklover936 chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
The title was perfect. I'm not usually one to read sad stories, but this is so well written that I want to read it again & again. Thank you for the amazing work! :)
| Shakari chapter 1 . 1/24/2010
It's really good. It's sad and painful, you can feel the emotion in it... I have tears forming in my eyes right now from the pain and sorrow.
| Emma Albazes chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
it was really good i luv it maybe a sequel plz
| nicoleeeeeeable chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
(in a good way.)
i love remus and hermione stories.
i almost cried...
| zippyzip chapter 1 . 10/10/2008
liked the way you worte it. I thought it was Hermione in his bed until he said dora lol. Amazing!
| Eusebius chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
Oh, wow. I was just thinking that was the saddest smut ever, and then you hit me with that "Just leave, Dora," line, and wow. Your title was incredibly appropriate, wonderful job.
| Lalalalaxx chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
Oh, that was wonderfully written! I actually thought he was talking about Tonks, until the:
“Just leave, Dora,” he said, sadly.
Very well written. :] I like it.
| patz1307 chapter 1 . 5/11/2008
this is really good..
it's heart warming too...
I like it...