Reviews for Heartbroken
Bloomrini chapter 1 . 3/7
although i prefer happy endings
but i ve to say that the twist was marvelous..
chantpleure chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
best plot twist ever!
LoriAnnRut chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
A little too sad for me.
RaeMazerolle chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
I'm bawling my eyes out right now. How utterly tragic. You kept him perfectly in character, it was amazing.
LadyStiff chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
This was so amazing! You really got me going there for awhile. I really thought you were talking about Tonks. I should have known. There's no way Remus would refuse Hermione ;-).

Very beautifully written and Rumus was just fantastic..
Midnight Mahogany chapter 1 . 2/19/2012

I loved the unexpected twist that it was Hermione who died and Tonks who came into the room.

You got the emotions right and I don't think the characters are that OOC.

So good work, great oneshot.

roxyrainbow chapter 1 . 9/18/2010
oh my you tricked not usually so easily fooled! i really loved this. beautiful and sad
booklover936 chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
The title was perfect. I'm not usually one to read sad stories, but this is so well written that I want to read it again & again. Thank you for the amazing work! :)
Shakari chapter 1 . 1/24/2010
It's really good. It's sad and painful, you can feel the emotion in it... I have tears forming in my eyes right now from the pain and sorrow.
Emma Albazes chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
it was really good i luv it maybe a sequel plz

Emma x
nicoleeeeeeable chapter 1 . 6/28/2009

(in a good way.)

i love remus and hermione stories.

i almost cried...

read mine!
zippyzip chapter 1 . 10/10/2008
liked the way you worte it. I thought it was Hermione in his bed until he said dora lol. Amazing!
Eusebius chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
Oh, wow. I was just thinking that was the saddest smut ever, and then you hit me with that "Just leave, Dora," line, and wow. Your title was incredibly appropriate, wonderful job.
Lalalalaxx chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
Oh, that was wonderfully written! I actually thought he was talking about Tonks, until the:

“Just leave, Dora,” he said, sadly.

Very well written. :] I like it.
patz1307 chapter 1 . 5/11/2008

this is really good..


it's heart warming too...

I like it...

very much...
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