Reviews for Desires For A Dragon
Arielle Stott chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
This is very nicely done. I do have a slight issue with the flow of this chapter, it's not as smooth as some of your other work. Some of the word choices are jarring, and don't seem to be just the right word for that particular sentence. Case in point, "Dragon, you just slid ''''onto'''' over my '''''sensitized'''' prostate." Those 2 words don't really fit the flow of that particular section. Next line, I think you were going for Seto started moving again, but he only moved once and Joey had something to say? It does fit but it's not a perfect fit. Little things like that just jar me out of the "I'm reading and ignoring the world" daze I go into, just a bit. Still I love this chapter and now I'm going on to read the rest.
dancing elf chapter 3 . 7/6/2011
nicely done
dancing elf chapter 1 . 3/21/2011
riveting
sherabo chapter 3 . 8/19/2009
How in the hell did I miss this chapter, its so wonderful. True Joey's birthday was extremly hot, I felt a sweetness and desires in Seto day. The ending suited the loving in their hearts for each other that I so enjoyed in one. Passion in this story. Thanks for the great read.
Destiny18 chapter 3 . 4/15/2009
your so horny good job
dragonlady222 chapter 3 . 10/28/2008
Great chapter. Seto and Joey get along so well. Serenity was great in this. I loved their little game. I hope Joey's birthday will be just a wonderful.
black rose pirate chapter 3 . 10/25/2008
lol hand on i thought seto was takin jou :P

gd gd update soon more lemon _
Akira Muratake chapter 2 . 10/16/2008
your story gave me a nosebleed.

thanks! -
HARPG0 chapter 2 . 10/12/2008
Strip Poker...? Hm... I once wrote about "Strip Duel Monsters..."
ITOxYAOIcomplex chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
O.o...

i lov it! i lov it! i lov it-i lov it-i lov it-i lov it-i lov it-i lov it!

probably da best lemon ive ever read!:L...

an ur 1st yaoi lemon...LIAR...!O.o

really...*speechless*
black rose pirate chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
luv it #_ so sweet ending )
sherabo chapter 1 . 10/9/2008
Hey, this is the best I've have read in a long, long, time. I adored Joey outfit, to the max. Seto as Uke, shit this is the bomb. Loved it...
Daydreamer-Of-The-Unknown chapter 1 . 9/30/2008
Awhh cute in a weird

sort of way..I love

when Seto refers to

Joey as his puppy..I

can't help but alwayz

say awh lol.

Great story.

x Rin x
DarkAnubisAngel chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
I think I have found another of my favorite YuGiOh fanfic authors .! That was an awesome oneshot, can't wait to read your other stories .

DarkAnubisAngel U.~U
dragonlady222 chapter 1 . 6/28/2008
Great story. I'm glad they finally got together.
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