Reviews for Play with Me
MrTech713 chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
Dominikku-kun chapter 1 . 3/13/2009
Of course... Naruto... dense as a freakin' brick wall!

Y'know, I'm actually not suprised! Seriously, a water balloon fight?

Though nice touch with the ending... I don't think Naruto had losing his virginity in mind that day, but, hey, he sure as hell enjoyed it, I'm sure...

And who'd have thought Hinata was a bigger perv than Naruto?

And... "The Talk"? Seriously?

Only Hiashi would have anatomically correct sock puppets...

Please, NEVER stop writing, you're just too damn talented!

SeductiveShigure chapter 1 . 3/11/2009
Wow, this was great!

It's inspiring and it's hilarious :)

hope you write many more of these! :)
Antioch XX chapter 1 . 3/11/2009
hahahahahahahahaha ... hahahahahahahahaa. that was funny as hell great little one shot.
wyrmmaster chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
... hahahahahahaha..haha. very funny! waterbaloons yeah he would make that mistake...haha.

Alman626 chapter 1 . 3/2/2009
Ha hA ha! XD

That has to be one of the most hillarious naruto stories I have read! Thats a good one! ROFL

This is going on my Fav list! :D
Chika Hoshi chapter 1 . 2/27/2009
That's so funny. I figure Hinata would have miss understood the whole situation of this. XD
Kokiiru-kun chapter 1 . 2/26/2009
There are just no words for Naruto. -_-' Water balloons...? Honestly... Then again, I'm pretty sure he'll never make that mistake again after Hinata gets finished with him.
winterkaguya chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
Hahahahahahaha...this is just so funny! Oh man...I can just imagine what was gonna happen!

I love how clueless Naruto is, and for a moment I DID think of yaoi!

Anyways, great job!
MRBee chapter 1 . 2/13/2009

jeez, relief sure can take the nerves away
naruhinaultrasuperfan4437 chapter 1 . 2/5/2009

I am a big fan of your stories:)
Kakashi's Missing Icha Book chapter 1 . 1/23/2009
uh...yep my brain just stopped (yes this was so disturbing that it stopped my brain just like kakashi)
IamMu-chan chapter 1 . 1/13/2009
Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! I felt so embarrassed for Naruto and Hinata in this one! I expected the water balloon thing, but the ending certainly shocked me...go hinata for being so confident! Great quickie, I mean, short story. :-D
Vero-Enelya chapter 1 . 1/6/2009
absolutely perfect... that's Naruto-kun! and I'd, like Hinata, love to show him how to play, ja ja ja.
loveistheheartsmiling137 chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
O My God i never thought Hinata could be thinking of that!( well maybe i hav...) it was really good though.
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