Reviews for Play with Me
A Reviewer chapter 1 . 3/3/2008
Not bad. I was a in some serious suspense. I was cracking up when Naruto mentioned kiba, but i think the ending paragraph could use a bit of work. Other than that it's all good!
bomber68 chapter 1 . 2/27/2008
o my well ever one like a good water balloon fight but why had none of the other boy told him what they really were for and yeah for Naruto for move to the next step
Conflict chapter 1 . 2/27/2008
ending a bit obvious... but it work so i won't complain... nice work.
black55widow chapter 1 . 2/23/2008
Oh my that's so funny and cute.
kljjlkjlkj chapter 1 . 2/23/2008

that is the FUNNIEST thing I have ever read

wow that is so funny haha

OMG i am actually LOL im not just saying that

ahahaha xD

Atanih chapter 1 . 2/21/2008
This was overly hilarious!

I couldn't wipe that smile off my face

Awesome I love love looved it.
PullMeLikeI'mYourZiper chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
gosh I can't stop laughing LMAO

Naruto is still inocent poor thing x'D typicall of Naruto :P

it's a smart and creative story, totally awsome it is!

loved your writting

Narutolover13 chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
WOW 0.0! COOL!
TobisaruJC chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
LOL! OMG! THAT WAS SO FUNNY! LOL! I can actually seeing this happen in the show! LOL! Awesome! LOL! Great Job!
Sonic0815 chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
you probably meant condom, not condemn the fun they are about to have :-)

that being said: nice...
smithjohn2020 chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
haha lol this is hilarious
Faebunneh chapter 1 . 2/11/2008
(blinks a couple of times and hides her nose bleed) heh heh water balloons...
myrthill chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
ho a dirty nasty Hinata _ I knew Hinata just misunderstood Naruto _ well, nice short one-shot :)
cloudKKK chapter 1 . 2/7/2008
it was a good lol
arutka2000 chapter 1 . 2/5/2008, yeah. That was...a..."special".
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