|Reviews for Play with Me|
| A Reviewer chapter 1 . 3/3/2008
Not bad. I was a in some serious suspense. I was cracking up when Naruto mentioned kiba, but i think the ending paragraph could use a bit of work. Other than that it's all good!
| bomber68 chapter 1 . 2/27/2008
o my well ever one like a good water balloon fight but why had none of the other boy told him what they really were for and yeah for Naruto for move to the next step
| Conflict chapter 1 . 2/27/2008
ending a bit obvious... but it work so i won't complain... nice work.
| black55widow chapter 1 . 2/23/2008
Oh my that's so funny and cute.
| kljjlkjlkj chapter 1 . 2/23/2008
that is the FUNNIEST thing I have ever read
wow that is so funny haha
OMG i am actually LOL im not just saying that
| Atanih chapter 1 . 2/21/2008
This was overly hilarious!
I couldn't wipe that smile off my face
Awesome I love love looved it.
| PullMeLikeI'mYourZiper chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
gosh I can't stop laughing LMAO
Naruto is still inocent poor thing x'D typicall of Naruto :P
it's a smart and creative story, totally awsome it is!
loved your writting
| Narutolover13 chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
WOW 0.0! COOL!
| TobisaruJC chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
LOL! OMG! THAT WAS SO FUNNY! LOL! I can actually seeing this happen in the show! LOL! Awesome! LOL! Great Job!
| Sonic0815 chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
you probably meant condom, not condemn the fun they are about to have :-)
that being said: nice...
| smithjohn2020 chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
haha lol this is hilarious
| Faebunneh chapter 1 . 2/11/2008
(blinks a couple of times and hides her nose bleed) heh heh water balloons...
| myrthill chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
ho a dirty nasty Hinata _ I knew Hinata just misunderstood Naruto _ well, nice short one-shot :)
| cloudKKK chapter 1 . 2/7/2008
it was a good lol
| arutka2000 chapter 1 . 2/5/2008
Wow...um, yeah. That was...a..."special".