Reviews for PMD: Dawn Guardians
searing light dragon chapter 23 . 5/14/2009
Very good chapter.
searing light dragon chapter 22 . 4/18/2009
The suspense thickens. I liked the chapter very much.
searing light dragon chapter 21 . 3/27/2009
Interesting chapter. Things are getting more intense. Update when you can.

-searing light dragon
searing light dragon chapter 20 . 3/15/2009
Good chapter. I liked it.
searing light dragon chapter 18 . 1/15/2009
Great chapter. Wonder what is going to happen to Aura?

-searing light dragon
A Handful of Words chapter 17 . 11/18/2008
Wow! I haven't reviewed in a while.

I changed my Pen name. I used to be RunningStorm, remember?

Anywho, very good chapter!
searing light dragon chapter 17 . 9/13/2008
I like it, good chapter
searing light dragon chapter 16 . 8/10/2008
Keep up the story! You're doing great!
Cathycalamitous chapter 16 . 8/7/2008
Update! This was so cool! i bet that Aura is Lucario's daughter and will be the "Leader" or whatever! :D :D so cool! And Jay is the Flygon's son, maybe Jack is the "Traiter" o rmaybe Jay is. Arg, i cant figure this out . I wonder how Aura will evolve. Maybe she'll be inside a shadow ball and evolve inside while it gets bigger and then the shadow ball will get all staticky and kinda explode and then Aura will be Lucario! :O Ah, im blabbing about random stuff too much . UPDATE! or i will hunt you down, HUNT YOU DOWN!
PokemonHero chapter 16 . 7/31/2008
*Looks around*

Hmm...for some odd reason this story seems familiar. Any idea why?

Anyways, I've been looking around for this story here. At least I'm assured you're working on it. I looked back and saw the changes. So far so good. I suggest you contine to follow the advice you have gotten here and on Serebii. I'm not the best person to ask for advice and I'm not afraid to admit it.
A Handful of Words chapter 16 . 7/31/2008
You changed the Prophocey to four Chosen instead of three. You added the "Seeker" into it. I ownder what or who, that's going to be!

Can't wait to find out.
Seeker Lyson chapter 15 . 7/31/2008
Oh...that was the pokemon that talked to Arura...I thought it was some wierd thing...anyways, sry for not reviewing! I've just had a lot to deal with lately, but all the same keep it up! And update soon.

Seeker Lyson chapter 14 . 7/31/2008
Uh-oh...great danger...that can't be good...
Seeker Lyson chapter 13 . 7/31/2008
Uh-oh...that isn't good...what will happen to Arua! In the dark prison!

Chaos: WHAT? You survived?
Seeker Lyson chapter 12 . 7/31/2008
You are like me my friend we both enjoy red things...Oh! Look its a red bomb!

Chaos: Ok say good bye to our friend he's going to get himself blown up.
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