|Reviews for A Man in a Swallowtail Suit Walks into a Bar|
| Squinkies chapter 1 . 9/2/2013
Cute. Well written too. Only technical stuff I'd say, like watch out for passive voice. And I think the bartender would have recngnized Vanessa.
| Popkov chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
Well Van is kind of a chick magnet lol.
He was told that he "attracts Armors and women" by... Ray i think.
| yukidaru chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
a crazy lady kidnapped van? Thats so messed up.
| Daphne Tomorrow chapter 1 . 2/6/2008
haha how crazy...that could totally happen to him, and detective wendy would totally figure it out! awesome story!
| Meicdon13 chapter 1 . 1/26/2008
*dies laughing* Sira ka talaga