Reviews for Best Laid Plans
DoubleDexterity chapter 1 . 5/9/2013
Haha, dude this was awesome. I think you portrayed Ratchet and Wheeljack quite well in this story. I really loved how they always bicker, especially the part where they're spying on the Cons from up top. This is really well written :D
Katea-Nui chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
I absolutely LOVED this! It was very well thought out.
creativesm75 chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
varsitylove16 chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
It's nice to see fics with our favorite medic and explosion-prone engineer that aren't slash. Love the sarcasm and friendly banter.

Sunflare2k5 chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
"A hive consciousness…" Ratchet mused speculatively as he watched the Decepticons casually going about their business, unaware that they were being watched. "With Megatron as the queen."

So THAT'S where BW Inferno got the idea? :)
Uniasus chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
Poor guys, they never got to Vegas, let along got to enjoy their vacation. And I have yet to figure out if I want to know what Jazz had planned for Red Alert.
FlyingFritz chapter 1 . 9/15/2009
"Oh, hah hah! Look, will you just do us both a favor and lose consciousness already?"

For some reason that line, out of all the other brilliant bits in this wonderful piece of fiction, made me laugh the hardest. This is hilarious yet endearing at the same time. Love the dynamics between these two, you portrayed their relationship so well. And the Ratchet/Dr. McCoy reference made me grin like a lunatic. Excellent job. :D

I am disappointed that they did not make it to Vegas though. Maybe next time?
Sergeant Duck chapter 1 . 6/6/2009
This has to be one of the funniest stories I've ever read...ever. I almost didn't read it at first 'cause I tend to lean more towards the *cough* romantic crap. But I can honestly say this is one of the best fanfics I've encountered to date.
Culture-Shock9 chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
Dude, epic win. Nice formating of their friendship, and small comic clips inbetween. The dry humor between them bother made me lol!

Keep up the rad work man.

Deepclaw chapter 1 . 1/25/2009
OMG this has got to be one of THE BEST stories out there with these two. They are so well done, your dialogue is amazing, your grammar's great, the storytelling is wonderful, it's beautifully written! I think it would be awesome if you did another like this. I hardly see any good fics with these two that's so convincingly done. :3 Great job! :D
Patronus Prime chapter 1 . 10/10/2008
Loved it! Wheeljack and Ratchet are the best, and the character depth you gave them was bloody brilliant.

It was a funny story, but thankfully not insane or out of character. This is going into my favorites!
ArmoredSoul chapter 1 . 5/15/2008

Jack and Ratch are at it again!

You just got to love those two, tweaked as they are.

51215fgdfh1654h5f chapter 1 . 4/18/2008
Lol, that was hilarious. xD Loved Ratch' and 'Jack's conversations. They just were too funny.
Bluebird Soaring chapter 1 . 11/18/2007
Too funny! So I wonder how long it will be before 'Jack wants another vacation )

This is a classic Wheeljack/Ratchet story...going in my favorites!
Silver Warrior chapter 1 . 10/19/2007
poor, poor Ratchet. He tried to take a vacation, only to end up even MORE in need of a vacation... Irony is so delicious, isn't it?
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