|Reviews for hackGU The Staircase to Nowhere|
| kingleby chapter 7 . 7/13/2009
what a cool sounding world!
poor haseo, being forced to eat ice cream (i don't like it either, or potatoes...yeah, i'm weird). Love atoli's little moments of confidence when she scolds him though _
| Stygian Styx chapter 7 . 7/12/2009
Great chapter! And Elk is gonna make an appearance next chapter, huh? Are you going to have Kite make an appearance? Or Mia mentioned? (in case you didn't know, Enderance was Elk in the first version of the world. Mia was Matcha, and either was pretending to be, or thought she was, a PC.)
| JDH1080 chapter 7 . 7/12/2009
please dont even think about not finishing this story this is very good so far and finaly you updated please keep it going
| Miyu-Moon chapter 7 . 7/11/2009
I have to apologize too, cause in the last months I couldnt work on the translation for the third chapter.
Now to the story.
Strange? Mustnthat mean that Shino should be thankful to Ryou and not to Ovan? What did HE that time? And how it comes that Ovan looks much older if the is the last-born?
Why a fan as the symbol of Ovan? That isnt his weapon. Hey, will you put the Lost Weapons in the story?
You havent to rush for us.
| Miyu-Moon chapter 6 . 7/11/2009
Sorry, but I have forgot my notices. (My paper for this chapter was full of questions.) But I try to remember them.
1. What is Sakaki thinking? I dont believe that he sepparated Atoli from Haseo only for their sake.
How can he dare to mess with Epitaph-Users?
Does he thinking that he is special, cause he work in the name of Morgana? Good, hes a top-healer like it seems, but he is risking more than the sympathy od the readers.
| The Azure Guardian chapter 7 . 7/10/2009
Nice. Now we see a real reason for Endrance to fight Haseo. Now the question will be "what will Bo do?", cause it's obvious Saku will cheer for Endrance like she does in the games while Bo would cheer for Haseo just like in the games. Being split apart, it would seem only Gorre can make the ultimate choice. It should still be an interesting fight. And if Gorre happens to help Macha fight Skeith, I wonder if Innis will jump in to help Skeith.
| kingleby chapter 6 . 5/14/2009
This story is amazing! the plot is well thought out and the characters are portrayed originally but are still recognisable. _ keep up the good work!
| Misa-chi chapter 5 . 3/4/2009
I had just made this account so I never had the chance to review this.. I have actually been reading this story for quite awhile and I think you have done it perfectly :]. It's so interesting with this whole concept.. I love it, I look forward to your other chapters!
| blackrogue123 chapter 6 . 2/8/2009
Hey, it's been awhile!
Sorry for the delay in my review, the update kind of got buried underneath a load of other stuff in my email account. .;
Anyway, it's nice to see Kuhn and Pi in the story, even if it meean seeing Sakaki's smug face, and its even nicer to see that you got their persona lities and relationship down perfectly! Actually, I think that's one of the best points about your writing: apart from the characters that you intentionally altered for the purpose fo the story, you've done a superbe job of nailing down how they'd act if they ever got stuck in their current predicaments.
I think that the scene with Atoli and Haseo was extremly well-done and really should have been in the games...even if it would have caused all the Atoli-haters and Shino/Alkaid-shippers to riot XD
P.S. I'm not mad about you taking forever to update...believe me, I think I'm even worse than you o.0;
| Stygian Styx chapter 6 . 2/5/2009
Great chapter, I can't wait for the next one!
| JDH1080 chapter 6 . 2/4/2009
hey about time you update good thing haseo and atoli made up now please update soon k?
| Akiyama Lhant chapter 6 . 2/4/2009
another nice new chapter, worthy for the long wait!
can't wait to see what will Endrance and his stalker will do :D
| C-Sui chapter 6 . 2/3/2009
Glad to see you updating again!
This chapter really explained a lot, but I was never bored or overwhelmed in any of the scenes. I loved it, especially how you portrayed the characters. But I shall keep a suspicious eye on that Sakaki...
Eheh, I can't wait to see En-sama and Sakubo. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!
| Miyu-Moon chapter 2 . 2/3/2009
Excuse me, I have made a writing mistake. Animexx has over 130.0 Online-Members. I forgot two zeros
| Miyu-Moon chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
Hm, how do I start? I thinked a very long time (you can laugh, it took me more than one full year), before I decided to make an account, so that I can write an review to your story.
I hope you will listen to me and dont ignore the critique. (Instead, please ignore my bad english.)
First, I am a fan of ".hack/GU The Staircase to Nowhere" and I am a german.
So you can be proud, that your story isnt only readed by Native Speakers, but from other .hack-fans as well. But on the most german fanfiction-platforms there arent many good Dothack-Stories, if you look through the base it has in the States.
So, can I get from you the permission, to translate your story into german? I will reload it in the german Site (a german community for anime and manga related stuff with over 130.0 Online-Members, theres a english version of the site too), with the right infos (like that YOU are the original autor and i am only the translator of course) and I will linked it to this site here. Would that be okay, for you or you already have some frineds or contacts, who are working on a german release.
No, i am not kidding and i am NOT from a publisher, a company or any other business-related thing.
If you say no, I will burn my notices or any other translated-related stuff, throw it away or use it as confetti for my next party.
If you say yes, I will send you an PM (the email version on this site, how was it called? Personal Message?), for detailed questions about the meanings from a few passages I am not sure. Likewise the class-thing at the church, where Ryou is going. Is it equal with a normal school class, or more religion-related?
You have time enough to think about it, but I would be glad, if you write ASAP back.