Reviews for Payback
17mckinnvirgir chapter 1 . 9/5/2014
I really love this sex story that you have made about Fakir and Ahiru.
Cherysh14 chapter 1 . 1/1/2014
Omg continue the story please!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
Don't worry, school took away my innocence, not you! But that's beside the point. This was superbly written, darling! Best lemon I've read so far! :3 Keep on writing, 'kay? Can't wait till your next story! :33
Belldandy chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
I cannot WAIT until your next story is available. Fantastic work! -thumbs up-
Guest chapter 1 . 4/24/2013
Lol! I love it.
Sakura Fleur Miyuku chapter 1 . 12/25/2010
...wow.

im not even old enough to read this. but i love it. it would be great if someone caught them. heeeheee *evil laugh*
midnightblue08 chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
woah amazing and a good read...
kuriqa chapter 1 . 10/3/2009
w-o-w this was very good smut you wrote it really well. i myself find it hard to write het smut, but this was very very well written and fakir was very much like most males and ahiru like most 'blossoming' girls she being embarrassed about what he did and him just loving it all the way all in all, great job

~K
Kumomi chapter 1 . 6/18/2009
CUTE! ]
ElfMaidenOfLight chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
oh wow, wow, that was... wow, amazing

but you alluded to times before, when he tied her up? write THAT! or at least, write more of them together- it's awesome
Alyson Metallium chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
A wah-wah-wah! I . . . wow. Just, wow. I really, really want to give a nice long review but . . . I'm so awed that my brain has dribbled somewhere other than where I want it. And I REALLY hope you write about their second time, having Fakir tie Ahiru to the dance bar with her own tights just makes me grin and get all tingly happy. XD
Hannaadi88 chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
wow...i really liked it! but in which episode did fakir turn into a tree?
Shirekat chapter 1 . 12/31/2008
PLEASE (repeat x 12) do the "dance studio encounter"! You're so good at writing these!

And they were surprisingly in-character... well, as in-character as they could be in this situation!

Great job! I can't wait to see more!
RennyWasHere chapter 1 . 12/15/2008
dont worry, it didnt destroy my innocence. try stumbling across southpark yaoi rape. thats an innocence destroyer!
Hatake Sienna chapter 1 . 10/7/2008
That’s so Ahiru to think she right about something that’s totally wrong lmao priceless XD Great job (two thumbs up)
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