Reviews for Kiss Shita Mama, Sayonara
Tonzura123 chapter 1 . 3/15/2011
BloodInYourVeins:

Sorry to have to respond to your message in this manner, but I'm afraid you canceled your Private Messaging. X)

As pleasing as it is hear that Old Narnian sounds real, it IS a completely made-up language. It's fashioned a bit off of other languages, so that the words sound familiar and are easier for the reader to associate with their definition. "Syr," for example, means "King" but sounds like "Sire." And quite on purpose: Calling a King "Quiggle" may not have had the same effect. XD

Thanks so much for the PM! If you have any more questions, feel free to ask.

Hope you have a great rest of your week!

As Always,

-Tonzura123
skylynn chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
i really loved this story. i was in tears wen i read it
Ashen Warrior chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
Good gosh that was depressing...

and yet, i loved it all the same.

Few spelling issues, like "sea-section" instead of C-section but I'm not a doctor so feel free...

It made me sad (which i'm sure is where you were going with it) so i'm fairly impressed.

Well done.
CrazyGirlofManyNames chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
Beautifully depressing.
yasminkov chapter 1 . 2/12/2008
Excellent oneshot, i havent read many adaptations to the kyubi attack, and none of the ones i have read have been anywhere near this good.
Cheapy Corp chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
Making me cry is a very difficult thing to do, but you have fully succeeded

Beautiful story
Starfire201 chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
As Kishimoto hasn't really given details of the battle beyond a few references, this wasn't a bad description, and I find it a bit more realistic than some of the other Kyuubi attacks Konoha on this site. Good job.