This spacing issue is why I sometimes wait for a story to be completed before I read it. Also, that way the author knows I'm just letting off steam if it turns out to be a Harry Potter fic with a Headbastard version of Albus. (That kind of worse-than-Voldemort presentation without killing said Headbastard warrants me howling at the author and I hate to do that while he's still writing it.)

Don't worry about Naruto's healing. Given the sheer malice of the Kyuubi, I'd bet serious poker stakes he screwed up Naruto's recovery from the fire.

I don't know if you'll ever read this, but remember that the Kyubii incident happened when Naruto's graduating class were only newborns. Considering the death toll, it wouldn't be a surprise that his class ended up so small.

Keep writing this is an amazing story

Bro, Naruto's reaction to hiruzen dieing had me crying

i like this story read it a couple of times just a suggestion you might want to change or expand how Sakura relates to Tsunade cause if she is related to the wife of the first shes also related to Naruto maybe go down a different grandparent instead of the first or his wife

as if

pathetic.

no, jutsu are more valuable

you're such a loser, author

so go fuck yourself

wtf you are really trying to give sakura a bloodline

you shun the uzumaki name by telling the namikaze has giant reserves and stamina, wtf the clan is already dead and forgotten and you do this

THIS STORY IS AMAZING! THANK YOU FOR YOUR HARD WORK!

I loved this story can’t wait to see if the Sequel comes out