Reviews for The Will Born in Fire
Gman232 chapter 37 . 6/17
I loved this story can’t wait to see if the Sequel comes out
Zeke chapter 37 . 6/16
I really enjoyed this story and am glad for this last chapter. you tied it up nicely. so many good stories just "peter" out.
Seankurt chapter 12 . 4/12
I really don't know why I continue to read this as of chapter 12 I've I've come to a realization that you're making Hinata and anko complete bitches Sakura is a bitch in the manga so I expect her to be one in all stories poor Naruto didn't do anything wrong this is stupid dumb bitches heard the wrong thing and now they're all mad at Naruto f*** them hopefully anko and Hinata don't stay bitches and hopefully you kill off sakura and at some point Naruto gets to kill Sasuke truthfully Sasuke should have been executed in the end of the manga seeing how he was a missing nin
Seankurt chapter 5 . 4/11
Ch 5 I hate Sakura and to make her related to the uzumakis is horseshit unless you're made it to where Tsunade is not related to the uzumakis because in 2008 when you started writing this it was already shown that tsunadis grandmother was an uzumakis and on top of that Naruto gets his chakra and stanima from the uzumakis which is his mother's side you should have had Tsunade train hinati and useless ankle train someone like shikamaru but again I'm only at chapter 5 you might have actually fixed all your mistakes
pipered54 chapter 37 . 4/1
Loved the story man and I like what you did with jiraiyas diary
nielnica12 chapter 28 . 2/24
Why is he healing so slooow.. canon naruto had his chest pierced by chidori and didnt take this long...
nielnica12 chapter 24 . 2/24
I like yamato’s presence on the fight tho
nielnica12 chapter 24 . 2/24
I really don’t like the idea having yugito or the raikage here.. sigh so stupid
nielnica12 chapter 21 . 2/24
An oc raikage? Why even have another kage there in the first place? XD
nielnica12 chapter 18 . 2/24
Naruhinasaku is what i want but if its only naruhina its cool too
nielnica12 chapter 11 . 2/24
At first i was like geez thirteen years old talking about love.. then i think about what i did when i was thirteen and i did more so...
nielnica12 chapter 5 . 2/24
I think you switched the attributes of naruto’s parents. His vast chakra is one of the thing that he inherited from kushina
nielnica12 chapter 1 . 2/24
I hope when you say demon you don’t mean actually a demon right? Kyuubi is a mass of chakra with consciousness. I know its kinda too late now even if thats what you meant. Still gonna read it at my own risk
Guest chapter 4 . 2/22
DAMN DIDNT HAVE TO DO SAKURA THAT HARD
MojoBlack chapter 3 . 1/28
Very creative what you had done regarding Narutos pranks. Far too many fanfics ignore the fact that his pranks are highly immature whether he s a kid or not.
Plus its annoying as hell. Im glad someone addressed it lol.
Having Hinata join was awesome as well.
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