|Reviews for Voodoo no Jutsu|
| Kuroshitsuji95 chapter 12 . 2/11
I loved this story! It was funny, sweet and very, very... you know. I'm totally going to read your other stories too, so you just got yourself an other fan. w 3
| GoTrinba chapter 12 . 1/27
A truly funny story. The plot was ingenious. From the beginning, the plot caught my attention, I saw true potential in the story line, and I wanted to find out what sorts of crazy things could happen. There was a little bit of everything in this story, comedy, among my favorite parts when Sasuke did a spontaneous handstand and black flip in front of konohamaru and company lol Naruto sure had fun messing with him at the beginning. Also when Naruto tried hooking Sasuke up with Sakura. Then there was a bit of angst which I love when Sasuke finds out what Naruto had done and they didn't speak for weeks. I enjoyed the smut although for this particular story, I was most interested in the progression of the story. I liked the last chapter and Sasuke's revenge. It was fun to read about Naruto getting a little taste of his own medicine with the voodoo doll jutsu being reversed on him in public. I enjoyed his misery. This has been a fun story to read in 2 days. Thanks for writing!
| miranda333 chapter 1 . 1/5
OMG, this whole story was actually amazing, I loved how you wrote everything in so much detail, it made me really able to feel what the characters were thinking. Like when sasuke and naruto were angsting after their fight, I was dying inside because everything was so emotional. Great job! I usually only read fanfiction that's less then 5000 words but you got me hooked with this one!
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/28/2013
This is AWESOME!
I loved what you were droning with sasuke, it's so funny! xD
And the reaction were not overly done but perfectly realistic.
I loved your story!( so far)
I can't wait to continue reading!:)
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/27/2013
Honestly, this story looks really intersting. One thing I didn't like though is, sasuke is NOT stronger than naruto, they are most defenitly equals. I understand though, if you needed him to be so naruto would get the idea of the whole voodoo thing. But yeah
It was just my opinion. XD I'm going to continue reading!
| TamiLove chapter 9 . 8/19/2013
SCREAMS IN FRUSTRATION! Goshdarnit Naruto! Why you have to get caught so perfectly and make Sasuke no love you no more!? BASTARD! lol! Heart racing the entire chap..
| TamiLove chapter 8 . 8/19/2013
ohmygodohmygod OHMYGOD! POOR SASUKE! You're so mean to him! But I LOVE ITTTTTTT!
| TamiLove chapter 6 . 8/19/2013
NARU! YOU'RE SOOOO MEANNNNNNN! lawls! Lovin it! Like McDonalds! :D
| TamiLove chapter 5 . 8/19/2013
This is... so awesome! Lol! I love it! Sasukes so hawtttttt! *squeeeee****
| TamiLove chapter 4 . 8/19/2013
Naruto messing with Sasuke is freaking hysterical! Lol! Touchtouch... *wigglewiggle* touchtouch...
| TamiLove chapter 1 . 8/19/2013
lmfao! This is interesting! I love the echo at the end... Or something.. Or something.. Or something.. lol! Loving it! I'm off to read moars! :D
| Onethatlovesyou chapter 12 . 8/6/2013
Okay I'm going to be 100% honest about this story... I LOVED IT! It just got better an better and then the last chapter. Holy. Shit. I adored the last chapter so so so much! This story is brilliant. There are some typos where it looks like the word wasn't fully typed out, but it was easy to tell what you meant so it didn't distract me from reading. The characters, especially Naruto, were a little different from the anime/manga, but honestly... If Naruto were ever to have a relationship with Sasuke in canon he would SO find out about his feelings in this very round-about way. And that's why I loved your Naruto. He had the same qualities as the manga/anime Naruto, but he grew as a person in his relationship with Sasuke, who (I just have to say) was so extraordinarily in character I was impressed. He would totally be a pervert sadist! XD in short, this story is brilliant and I thank you so so much for writing it. I don't remember my ff login, but I'm fluffmonsterc3 on Livejournal.
| Mrbiq chapter 11 . 7/13/2013
Yay! just 80 more reviews to go via the smut calculator!
Okay an in depth review...
The climax and story line was very well done, however I am a sasunaru fan. In the summary, it says NaruSasuNaru so I was expecting some scenes where Sasuke tops. There weren't any. That was sad. I would modify the summary if I were you.
I felt that Sasuke was well characterized, and so was Naruto. You've made the story relatable and a pleasure to read.
However Sasuke is slightly out of character. You've predicred his reaction pretty well, however after finding out that the Voodoo no Jutsu was used on him, he'd be pretty pissed. You've shown him casually shrugging it off during the sparring... that doesnt seem very likely. Plus after they've made up, the interrupted make-out was a bit of an anti-climax. Mabe show a bit of Sasuke's sadistic tendencies off there...?
I am a Sasuke fangirl, so maybe I am biased...
Overall a nice read, with drama, angst and smut thrown in. The concept was original and well thought out too. I cannot name any plot holes, because I have a tendency to ignore such things while reading...
Thanks for the awesome read!
| Historia Thirteen chapter 12 . 7/6/2013
great story. i enjoyed it, original too. i always liked the thought of using voodoo dolls. ;)
| Butcher-chan chapter 9 . 6/24/2013
Ouch. Like, seriously. Burn.
Poor naruto. But mostly, poor sasuke.