|Reviews for Slave Child
| enb2004 chapter 79 . 11/14/2023
I am really glad that everything worked out so well for Harry and Severus! I am bummed this story has been abandoned, but this is a good place to leave it!
| Liseyloo123 chapter 79 . 11/11/2023
Wow, just wow! I smiled, giggled and bawled my eyes out over this story. Some really sensitive parts and such raw emotion so very well written. I have to say this is certainly one of my favourite fan fiction pieces, if not my actual favourite! Thankyou for such a wonderful story. I loved watching snapes snd Harry's relationship blossom, and how his friends remained supportive through it all. I bloody loved this, and as much as it could certainly be finished a part of me wants to read more.
Thankyou again fir such a brilliantly well written piece of fiction
| Zelda chapter 79 . 8/5/2023
Way 2 long but it’s alright I guess
| summeronice chapter 73 . 6/14/2023
Surely you won't read it but I would like to congratulate you for this wonderful story. I didn't expect anything, in fact maybe I was expecting the usual stories (slavery, snape/harry) but it amused and interested me. Very, very good !
| Emperor Phantom chapter 79 . 3/10/2022
great story.. love it..I hope u can continue it.
| PEACHESandBUNNY 17 chapter 79 . 2/4/2022
I hope that you will update this story again soon because I would love to see where you take it from here
| Obsidianshadow89 chapter 18 . 12/27/2021
this has been a really good fic so far, I'm really enjoying it
| Obsidianshadow89 chapter 11 . 12/27/2021
and yet you kept insisting he was spoiled... -shakes head-
| duck chapter 79 . 11/30/2021
Really enjoyed this! I hope you do continue one day. I'm pretty happy with the ending at the reveal after the adoption, but I'd also love to read more about this universe. I think the best thing to do would be to let this story end post-adoption and then start a sequel with the last couple of chapters. That would greatly improve the experience for your readers, especially if you never come back to it.
| duck chapter 25 . 11/29/2021
Nooo! Can't Severus conjure some fish food for the goldfish? Been reading this on and off all day. Really am loving how far Severus and Harry have come. The suicide attempt was scary though. I hoped you weren't going there and am glad you didn't.
| duck chapter 2 . 11/29/2021
I'm going to get super nitpicky here. Dumbledore might say Archaic Latin or Old Latin or possibly even Proto Indo-European or PIE for short but wouldn't say Ancient Latin because even Classical Latin is still ancient and that is what they spoke in Ancient Rome and what they speak in the Vatican today. I do like this story so far and look forward to discovering more about the mystery spell.
| LittleElfynOne chapter 10 . 8/5/2021
Frankly don't understand why Snape should be apologising to Harry here. Its like aww poor Harry suffering consequences for not being able to follow basic instruction, Snape has no reason to believe Harry about the journal given Harry's disgusting breach of privacy the year prior. Honestly the punishment was only to do some cleaning and he was called away to a medical emergency and because Harry is a self absorbed incompetent idiot he can't even manage that without causing problems.
| Shao7 chapter 79 . 6/24/2021
I thought you were wrapping up the story then you added the escape from the Ministry.
| Rossess20 chapter 24 . 6/10/2021
Wow. This is a bit out of nowhere. It's in line with the story but I feel like I missed a lot of Sev's reasoning... Very sweet though!
| Rossess20 chapter 22 . 6/10/2021
Wow I was not paying attention. I thought this was coming up on the end of the fic! :,D