Reviews for Slave Child
Raiise chapter 3 . 2/10/2008
O.M.G! I'm shaking, literally shaking. 'enslaved'?, to him? Ah.

Sorry about that, that... that is just scary, even to think about!

But I gotta admit, excellent idea!
coffee walnut chapter 3 . 2/9/2008
GOD! i knew it was going to be something like this but this was still a bit weird... i like the way you described prince hall and its inhabitants!

Well, keep up the good work!
zafaran chapter 3 . 2/9/2008
I do hope karma comes back and bites Draco for this mess. I'm looking forward to finding out how Severus and Harry deal with this. Severus's House Elves will probably find it delightful because it gives Severus someone to be with him for the rest of his life. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Snarky B chapter 3 . 2/9/2008
I like your story. Though the house elves seemed off somehow-they seemed too 'well spoken.' They were clothed as well. This seemed odd to me since you said Snape's father was an old-fashioned pureblood, and I'm assuming the elves used to belong to him. I'm assuming you'll explain this in a future chapter.

Good job, and I hope to read more soon.
mystery gal chapter 3 . 2/9/2008
can't wait till Harry wakes up and meets Snape! Hope to see a lot of drama and action! great chapter and update soon, plz!
Bsum1 chapter 3 . 2/9/2008
Gah! I'm going mad with anticipation. Harry! Harry, wake up!
Kathryn Merlin chapter 3 . 2/9/2008
hee hee its getting good. i really like your writing style.
ms.gringotts chapter 3 . 2/9/2008
! Look forward to your next chapter.
FloatingWithoutPurpose chapter 3 . 2/9/2008
Hahahahahahaha I think they are going to have so much fun at Prince hall. *sniggers*
Lubbleeone chapter 3 . 2/9/2008
o.0...LOL hope you update soonly xD
delete2011 chapter 3 . 2/9/2008
...to Severus? Hm, maybe because Severus caught him...I dunno...hope you update soon!
Magpie quill chapter 3 . 2/9/2008
omg. this is an f-ing amazing update.
breannatala chapter 3 . 2/9/2008
awesome! I love the history
Murgy31 chapter 3 . 2/9/2008
This is an awesome story! Please update soon!
reader chapter 3 . 2/9/2008
I like this story very much so far

please keep going.
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