|Reviews for Name|
| DanaryesIsGoingToBreakTheWheel chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
A great story. Very good.
| stardust2002 chapter 1 . 1/29/2008
It's a good beginning but you haven't really explored anything we didn't already know here. To make it more interesting you'd need to make it more in depth and take it further - we all know starbuck drinks to forget the pain.
Maybe you could make it into a full length story instead of just a drabble. See where it leads you - does her drinking just make the situation worse? Does she take it out on herself by being reckless? What do others think? Do they understand, even those in command like the CAG and the Admiral? Is this all meant to happen as Leoben states - 'this has all happened before and it will all happen again' or is it BECAUSE of her? There are a lot of places you could take this that would make it much more interesting.
Keep on writing. I'd be interested to see what you come up with.