Reviews for The Last Day
avatargirl92008 chapter 12 . 6/30/2008
love this story! great chapter! Can't wait till the next one! glad your puppy's better! )

p.s.- 14 more days till the new Avatar Episodes!
WanderingChild96 chapter 11 . 6/30/2008
I'm sorry about your dog! And the puppy! I forgive you for the shortness of the chapter, cuz it still had me interested. Please update sooner next time!
arizony chapter 11 . 6/29/2008
You're doing great so far. So believable, looking forward to the rest of the story, to quote Paul Harvey...
arizony chapter 10 . 6/23/2008
You are getting better as you go along. I really love how you work to keep everyone in character. I'm looking forward to the next installment.
WanderingChild96 chapter 10 . 6/15/2008
Sokka was pretty good about it, wasn't he? And I didn't think Toph was that mean to Aang. It seemed very much like her. Nice chapter!
WanderingChild96 chapter 9 . 6/2/2008
You finally updated! It was worth the wait!
WanderingChild96 chapter 8 . 5/6/2008
That was much better than the original! I the humor with Haru in the beginning of the chapter, and how it turned into a friendly moment between Zuko and Katara. Update soon!
WanderingChild96 chapter 7 . 5/4/2008
That was a pretty boring chapter. Katara is totes OOC in this story.
WanderingChild96 chapter 6 . 5/4/2008
It was ok. I didn't like it as well as the others, and will this eventually become Zutara? I hope so!
WanderingChild96 chapter 5 . 3/31/2008
I liked it!
WanderingChild96 chapter 4 . 3/31/2008
I like it!
KnightRayne25 chapter 4 . 3/18/2008
writer's block or not it was still good.
Craz4Avatar chapter 4 . 3/17/2008
Nice! Though l find it unlikely that zuko would have killed their was an excellent read, and im eager for more!
KnightRayne25 chapter 3 . 3/13/2008
cool, can't wait for more.
WanderingChild96 chapter 2 . 3/11/2008
I really like this story, so keep updating please!
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