|Reviews for Making War|
| DegenerateSage chapter 1 . 11/4/2008
man wat i an awsome story i cant believe it was ur first lemon u cud have fool me wow i cant stop saying everything was so unexpected but i flowed well it seems like something they wud do indeed and wow to have it happen by accident i have seen that in a few movies i am addin you to my favorites u rock keep up the good work.
| flordesombra chapter 1 . 10/27/2008
Bravo! Great fic, I enjoyed it so much. The sex scenes, the fighting moments and the gags are absolutely in character. Congratulations, I'm gonna read all your fics right now. Hugs.
| Li Kagami chapter 1 . 10/16/2008
And this is the reason your one of my fav authors.
You just HAVE to write more like this... if you have to go to another site post a link so i can follow, you are the RaAk master!
I get how they survived... they are martial artists after all.
Would love to see the aftermath... and wether ranma still refuses to train akane.
now off to your profile to see what i've not yet read...
| poyopsoh chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
so wonderfully written.
a rather emberassing way to discover one's feelings but interesting and delicious nonetheless
| Suusaa chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
your first attempt of lemon? o.O unbelievable! loved it... I really liked your language it's not exaggerated, it just feels kinda right It's the best lemon I've ever read. ;)
| Angela Jewell chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
This story was awesome (not to mention extremely well written). I couldn't stop grinning the entire time I was reading it... it's *SO* Ranma and Akane. We all knew that pent up frustration and sexual tension had to explode sometime! And oh, what an explosion! _
| Sparkly Faerie chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
I believe I've read this before, but I (obviously) must have neglected to review. I'll rectify this right now.
Let me just say; only those two could have a brawl as foreplay.
Definately the best lemon I've read in a long time, and it's the only decent RanmaxAkane lemon I've ever come across. Beatuifully descriptive without all the pornographic euphemisms that make me nauseous when applied too liberally. The existence of plot. Small injections of humour.
Wonderful. Simply wonderful.
I look forward to more of your work in the future.
| Lana Atkins chapter 1 . 8/20/2008
When you said intense, I had no *friggin* idea.
I'm not much for lemon fics, but I think this one was quite tastefully done :) It actually has a *plot*. It makes sense.
How they managed to survive all that, however, is beyond my understanding ;P
Another wonderful job! :)
| senbo-sama chapter 1 . 8/9/2008
One punch equals a fluff moment, so OF COURSE a crazy, over-the-top fight equals sex! GENIUS! lol Loved this fic, you really got them nailed. ...no pun intended..
| angelofgodsgrace chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
Omg I freaking loved it! I could really see that happening with them! I like that they were in character too-they are like one of my favorite couples. I love them and I wanted to find a lemon because I just think with all that tension something between them has to come out! lol Love the story though, you should make another ranma story!
| Xasonnex chapter 1 . 8/3/2008
I only see two ways for Ranma and Akane to "get together", and if your not going the slow, awkward route, this is how I see the other happening. Great portrayal of pent-up emotions being released.
| t wrecks chapter 1 . 8/1/2008
Did ok with it, not to much porn but enough description to follow the action
| nikka-chi chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
it was AMAZING! you are a genius, a genius! It was so detailed and there was NO OOCness. kya, it was just the best lemon ever thanks so much for writing this!
| otaku-Stasi chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
*applauds widly, wiping tears from eyes* Absolutely magnificent! I LOVED it! It was slightly typical, it was sexy, it was provocative, it was explicit, and I loved every bit of it. I look forward to reading more of your stories if you do more of Ranma. My compliments to you.
| xxarmisteadxx chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
i wuv the title! :DD and the story too! haha. thanks for writing this!