|Reviews for The True Story Of Love Lost and Found Again|
| JBLovesSharks chapter 3 . 12/6/2008
no more? *blink blink* ... pout :p
| catgrl chapter 3 . 2/18/2008
Good chapter hope to see more soon.
| reader2008 chapter 3 . 2/17/2008
that was good. i like it. it's really sad. alcohol is his escape from everything. he's going to learn that it's not going to get him away from his problems.
| coffeeberry chapter 3 . 2/17/2008
Whoa. So sad.
Cannot wait for the next chapter.
| Thatemilykid chapter 3 . 2/14/2008
still in love with it, amazing chapter, thank you.!
| the psycho sour skittle chapter 3 . 2/14/2008
that was a great use of Your Eyes from Rent. loved it!
| Chylea3784 chapter 3 . 2/14/2008
| Nanuk chapter 3 . 2/14/2008
Hmm, nice writing but you need to pay more attention to your characterizations. While you change POV, which is quite nice btw, your characters don't really sound different, despite being different in so many ways - gender, thoughts etc. Brenna may be your own character, but neither Cameron nor House are. I'm missing his harshness, her "fluffiness". I know how easy it is to change the characters without any wanting to just so that they fit the story, but please don't go that way.
House is not a man who would get upset by getting into a fight with a child (and "I hate you" is something that every child tells their parents at one time in their life), nor by the opinion of outsiders. Heck, he doesn't even care about the opinions of friends.
Also, I know we've seen House drink on more than one occasion, but I still remember him saying, "I don't drink", meaning he knows well enough what the combination of Vicodin and alcohol does to him.
I hope I didn't offend you by what I said. It's just that I know from personal experience how easy it is to actually rape the characters and write them into something they are not. As I said, please don't make that mistake, don't go that way.
All the best for your future writing.
| catgrl chapter 2 . 2/4/2008
| ILUVHOUSE chapter 2 . 2/3/2008
More Soon PLEASE!
Did I tell you that I love it? I'm like ADDICTED!
| roni 711 chapter 2 . 2/2/2008
Great job ! Loved Cam's backstory and the way she convinced him to make a choice ! Lovin' it ! Keep it coming !
| KittyX1981 chapter 2 . 2/2/2008
| Chylea3784 chapter 2 . 2/2/2008
Absolutely loved the chapter! PLEASE update soon!
| reader2008 chapter 2 . 2/1/2008
so he went to rehab twice? i'm confused. jess, help me. and did she go to arizona after brenna? or before?
it's cute though how much he loves her
| Limaccia chapter 1 . 2/1/2008
Nope, to put it mildly, don't like it. Good luck on getting past your writers block on your current stories. I hope it happens soon.