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MusicAngel13 chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
epic
Guest chapter 12 . 10/14/2012
awwwwwwww please continue this as soon as possible this is my fav gakuen fanfiction story i dont need editing you can always start the nxt chapter betteer thhan ever so ppl cansee the difference
DarkFlameInfernal chapter 12 . 3/6/2011
Love it
moonacre99 chapter 12 . 10/31/2009
PLEASE DON'T STOP YOUR STORY... :( :(

I LOVE IT VERY MUCH!
yueyuuko chapter 11 . 3/14/2009
what do mean

“Mikan…” Hotaru mumbled as she kept wiping the tears. HER SISTER was growing up and reality hit her that Mikan wasn’t always going to be with her all the time now and in the future since she’ll have Hyuuga too.
Olympiangirl chapter 12 . 12/29/2008
That's OK! Just update soon!
CheshireGrins chapter 12 . 12/28/2008
o.o...goodluck?O.o -gives u a cookie-
konnie chapter 12 . 12/28/2008
it's okay but like i can't wait!
Olympiangirl chapter 11 . 11/22/2008
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sweetcandy90 chapter 11 . 10/19/2008
I think its great i really will be waiting for the next chapter

mikan and natsume are just soo cute as a couple i love it
090mikanXnatsume090 chapter 4 . 8/22/2008
love it
090mikanXnatsume090 chapter 3 . 8/22/2008
:)
Smoochynose chapter 11 . 8/6/2008
That's so sweet. They seem to have forgotten that they're both enganged, although they don't know it's to each other. Update soon. I want them to runaway together.
roca chapter 2 . 8/4/2008
know what?

i love 8

i can feel that...

there will be some conflicts
natsume143 chapter 11 . 8/4/2008
no problem at all! D
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