Reviews for A normal day
good but chapter 1 . 2/16/2012
YOUR GRAMMAR IS AWFUL , please learn to write correctly for the next time :)
LogicalGoth chapter 1 . 7/7/2008
The story was really good! And it was well written but... the ending was HORRIBLE! No offense but that isn't how you finish a oneshot... other than than good job


Grendle1853 chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
Sorry for saying this (especially coming from me), but you have to check your grammar. This story is next to impossible to read. Again sorry.