Reviews for Fragments of Memory |
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AlwaysPern chapter 8 . 6/2/2022 I kinda wish he had died fighting thread. That would seem more logical. Sorry, I always feel like I don't have the right to criticized. I have a problem stringing more than 3 coherent lines together. Thanks for writing your stories |
AlwaysPern chapter 15 . 6/2/2022 I for one LOVE that they were reincarnated into firelizards! Thanks for this ! |
AnitaA chapter 15 . 4/12/2010 I like the fire lizard reincarnation. Loved all the chapters. Thanks for writing. |
ToDifferentToBeReal chapter 15 . 12/26/2009 I like it the story overall. For some odd reason I didn't like the ending, don't ask for an explaination because I don't know why. It was a clever idea but my brain rebelled against it. However it did inspire me to write a short piece of my own that I am just finishing, so thank you for the inspiration, especially since I haven't been able to spit out much, let alone finish anything in well over a year. Again, my compliments, I liked the story. ~TooDiffer2BReal |
australis-angel chapter 15 . 11/7/2009 I really enjoyed this :) It didn't bother me the memories weren't in chronological order, or prefaced by something like 'the glow on her bedside table reminded her of the control panels in the Yokohama..' You've grabbed the essence of the Lessa we know and love and embellished it and done a great job! And I'm LOL that she got reincarnated as a fire lizard, though that was the best ending to be free of responsiblity...and who wouldn't want to be reincarnated as a fire lizard! :D |
Chefnem chapter 8 . 8/23/2009 This one was terrific! I feel so sad, now... Well done, I like it very much! |
webuiltmonsters chapter 15 . 2/6/2009 i love this last chapter i feel that after all they had been through and done they deserved a happy ending |
minty tiger chapter 15 . 1/31/2009 I enjoyed this story. You like writing about F'lar and Lessa, don't you? :D They're great characters so I don't blame you, and I'm sure they'd be more stories about the couple if everyone could write as well as you! The ending was unexpected, but great, and it's sweet how for one instant they remember and they are reunited, and that's really all they needed :D *faves* |
Moreta Reborn chapter 15 . 12/3/2008 YOU MADE ME CRY! It was so right for them to be reincarnated as firelizards. "Free at last. Forever." CRY |
Moreta Reborn chapter 1 . 12/3/2008 Ramoth is THE largest dragon on record, in Pern canon. Otherwise, sad and sweet. |
x.Who.Dares.Wins.x chapter 15 . 5/10/2008 Ah bless, Lessa is the best ever! |
mance-rayder chapter 15 . 4/9/2008 I thought it was a good idea! |
Blaaaaaah chapter 15 . 4/8/2008 I loved the little glimpses into Lessa's mind and the reincarnation cycle at the very end of who they have been in their lives, SO SWEET! WELL DONE! |
Lioness's Heart chapter 15 . 4/1/2008 Wow...that was very...interesting...I loved it! It was so sweet! Especially the last part! It was a perfect ending, I can't even find words to describe how much I liked it! The story itself was absolutely wonderful, but this was the best chapter by far! It was a beautiful ending. You did a superb job. Lioness |
Lioness's Heart chapter 14 . 3/31/2008 Wow...that was really good...you almost had be in tears, it was that good. You write Lessa beautifully, and I'm looking forward to the last chapter. Lioness |