|Reviews for Written in the Stars|
| sheiksleopardthong chapter 23 . 4/16
This story changed my life. I rarely read long fics and I honestly have not really thought about yugioh since middle school but this story is...holy shit.
The research you've put into it, the characterization, the romance, the plot!
It's really really late so I can't really say much else bc my brain is mush but thank you.
thank you for writing this.
| leighd1314 chapter 23 . 4/7
This is a really nice story, it is one of the few times I actually cried while reading one. I absolutely loved it.
| metallicbubbles chapter 23 . 4/4
Oh my gosh this was such a lovely story and amazing plot. Love the twist about how the timeline ended up changing anyway, but for the better. I'm going to get diabetes from all the sweetness. God help me.
| Qwoppop chapter 23 . 3/18
oh thank god it had a happy ending
i'm still crying btw so hey, kudos to you
| Ghostlanxx chapter 23 . 3/14
Oh my god thia story. Of my god. I am actually crying right now. When you first wrote "next 24 hours", I could FEEL my stomach falling on the floor. Then the mahjong tiles being burned? AND YUUGI WENT BACK and I couldn't take it BUT THEN ATEM WAS THERE. That was one emotional roller coaster, I am crying all kinds of tears of relief.
Thank you thank you THANK YOU for this story. This was the second Yu-Gi-Oh fic I've ever read, and boy, so far, this fandom has the best writers.
I actually thought that the twist would be something like Yuugi having to seal Atem in the Puzzle, and that's why Yuugi would become the Chosen One. A sort of paradox a way - Yuugi is the Chosen One by Atem, which causes him to go back, which makes him seal Atem, which makes him the Chosen one, which makes him go back...
Now I want to write this somehow. :D
I am so so so SO grateful for this story. Wow, what a ride. I am going to have to go to sleep now and process it all. Just... Wow.
(THEY BOTH WENT BACK)
| Ghostlanxx chapter 22 . 3/14
Oh my god Yugi used to DYE his hair! THAT'S why they shaved it, that's why it grew back different, and that's why they thought he was mocking Atem! Well, better late than never :'D only one more chapter left :(
| Ghostlanxx chapter 21 . 3/14
I have this dread that something bad is coming. Aside from Atem sealing himself in the puzzle. :(
| Ghostlanxx chapter 20 . 3/14
I think I missed something. In one scene, Atem said that he was still waiting for one specific thing before full intimacy, and they went to bed only kissing. The next morning, however, Yuugi had trouble sitting and Atem was kept up all night and 'there was no lovemaking that night'? What did I miss? :(
(Is there maybe a livejournal with the more mature themes? Just for science. :P )
| Ghostlanxx chapter 18 . 3/13
The guy with the Millennium Eye. He can read minds. He can read Yuugi's mind. He knows that Yuugi knows the future, and his role in it. I have a suspect.
| Ghostlanxx chapter 17 . 3/13
I'm guessing a woman. Statistically, women use poison.
| Ghostlanxx chapter 16 . 3/13
I know these generic reviews are a bother, BUT I HAVE SO MANY FEELS ABOUT THESE BABIES *sobs some more*
Brave, precious, darling boys
| Ghostlanxx chapter 15 . 3/13
OH MY VERY VERY BRAVE BOYS. The both of you. Brave, brave boys.
| Ghostlanxx chapter 14 . 3/13
Atem actually went and told Yuugi he wanted to court him after all *that*. Man, that is one of the bravest effing things I have read on this site. (And then he was crying :( sweet summer child :'( )
I hope Yuugi gets the chance to talk to him soon!
| SitaIdeo chapter 23 . 3/12
I know this probably won't get seen, but this is hands down one of the best puzzleshipping fanfictions I've ever read. It was so gorgeously crafted, and had me in complete awe. I loved all of the little details, and everything. I'm really sad it ended, but the ending was nothing I could have anticipated. It was wonderful, and I'm really pleased that I found this. I feel that I'll come back to this in the future because this feels like a fic that's unlikely to be forgotten.
| Ghostlanxx chapter 10 . 3/12
There is just one thing that puzzles me - how does nobody notice how much Yuugi looks like Atem?
For the concrit part: I really love this story, the characters, the pacing. How Yuugi deals with his trauma (which doesn't sound very healthy, but I guess it's the best he can do in that situation...). Sometimes I get lost in how much time has passed in the story (it always seems less to me, amd then I'm surprised when you write "7 months", when I thought it was 7 weeks :D ), though. :)