| Reviews for Written in the Stars |
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   unspecifiedaccount chapter 5 . 2/8/2008 I really enjoyed this chapter, probably one of my favourites so far. I thought the dream sequence especially was very well done. |
| ONIX-21 chapter 5 . 2/8/2008 Hey great new chap! i was a bit hesitant about reading the scene with Atem and Yugi in the bed chambers but im glad u didnt out to much emphasis on it and didnt make it seem like a rape scene :D great job i liked the little bit at the end with the peas lol cant wait for ur next chapter so i hope u update soon :D :D |
| Chi-Eiki chapter 4 . 2/5/2008 Whoo! Once again, another story that I should have totally checked out earlier then this! Now I have to wait for while until the next update, and I'm so anxious! Love your story very much, and I can't wait until the next update! -Chi |
| Yana5 chapter 4 . 2/2/2008 poor yugi |
| Atemu Yugi Lover34 chapter 4 . 2/2/2008 I can't believe you have so few reviews. I like this a lot. It's... interesting. Update soon plz. |
| Shamise chapter 4 . 2/2/2008 The foreboding just sends tingles up my spine. I wonder what Atem's gonna do. Poor Yuugi, I cant help but feel sorry for him. |
| Yana5 chapter 3 . 1/31/2008 poor Yuugi |
| ONIX-21 chapter 3 . 1/31/2008 hey great update! poor Yuugi havin to loose :( lol oh well hehe a great chapter and i cant wait for the next one! :D :D |
| Yana5 chapter 2 . 1/30/2008 hahahahaha poor Yugi |
| Shamise chapter 2 . 1/30/2008 Loved it! |
| faithonhold chapter 2 . 1/30/2008 Update soon! I love this story! Yuugi's BALD? LOL I hope he gets his hair back soon :D hehe love Yuugi's choice of words at the end-"well, shit," :P |
| faithonhold chapter 1 . 1/30/2008 Wow! Wonder what's gonna happen next? I loved the way you ended the chapter :D |
| Yana5 chapter 1 . 1/28/2008 cool chapter |
| unseenwaters chapter 1 . 1/28/2008 this curse part looks interesting. :) update soon |
| olesia.love chapter 1 . 1/28/2008 Hey, look, I'm a little bit famous on the internet. Score. And, yes, I see what you mean stylistically about the last paragraph-and-a-line. Makes sense, and isn't nearly as "HAY READER LOOK" as I first thought (though still almost too much reminiscent of neon guiding arrows. *shrugs* Stylistically not something I'd ever use, but it works.) Now, let's see if you can actually pull this off, shall we? *smiles* |