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I love the story. D

So is this the END or R U going to continue ON? It's been a year you know.

This great so far. You're descriptive but not over the top with anything. I've only seen a few episodes of the show but I could follow your fic. Very Nice. Are you going to update it soon? Or post another story? -Lia.

update soon

plz

cool

Nice beginning for a fic. Your plot looks really interesting. Please write more as soon as you can!

lol, hinata just caught her sensei *doing* Copy ninja! love it! xD you gotta continue, it's getting really good!

Woah! Poor Innocent Hinata. The story is written very well. Keep up the good work! (I just know you will) :)

A good chapter and a very good lemon. I like the pairing a lot, not the same old Asuma/Kurenai we always get in stories on this site. You've even set up some nice drama between Asuma and Kakashi once he finds out that Kurenai is with Kakashi now. Keep up the great work, and update again soon.

This is a great start. There are so many stories of Hiashi kicking Hinata out but no one takes this angle. I love it!

I also like how you highlight the underlying tensions between Hiashi and Kurenai. Most authors don't notice the interaction seemed to have more hidden than surface-level anger.

Keep up the good work. I can't wait to see how you portray and develop Kurenai's personality. I like Kakashi and Asuma, either one is great with Kurenai. I think that Asuma could be a good male role model for Hinata better than Kakashi, though.

A really good story so far. I've got a similar side story in my own main story in which Hinata is banished and Kurenai becomes her guardian. I'll be curious to see how you'll work your story in upcoming chapters. As for doing a lemon, you'll need to upgrade your rating to "M" to do it, but if you want to do one, go for it. As for the pairing please don't do Asuma/Kurenai for it. I like Asuma, but that pairing has been done to death on this site. I say go with Kakashi for something unique and different. I look forward to the next chapter.

One of the best in this particular genre that I've read _ please continue it soon