Reviews for The Spirit in the Blade
Kit chapter 6 . 5/5/2013
Good story. I do wonder if she still has her wings and can she fly with them? Hmm...
FlareX3 chapter 6 . 3/31/2008
It was an interesting idea. Your description is more than fair though I felt the battle scenes were a little vague. That is forgivable though since I believe physical conflict was not the focus of this story. The ending was a little unbelievable though. Why would a Chaos champion turn so easily and how could he fall in love with a girl he had been rather cruel to so recently? I just felt that he turned from his twisted ways a little to abruptly. However, in the end, it was an intriguing plot with decent description so keep it up!
raffj002 chapter 6 . 2/8/2008
Brilliant hope you keep them coming, thourghly
Rimshooter chapter 1 . 2/1/2008
confusing
mgunh1 chapter 6 . 1/28/2008
Ok, wow. That was good. Um... yeah... don't really know how to respond to that. Keep this up and you'll be doing well in no time! Just... wow...