|Reviews for first light|
| TrillionSchiffer chapter 23 . 2/5
Good story. I dont think the volturi will keep that promise to leave the Cullens alone. They are just bidding their time. Aro just has to wait for the right gift to come along and its on! Well... seems like the Cullens immortality will be cut short in a few centuries. Its all a matter of time.
I really don't know why Carlisle took Aro hand and gave up so much information. smh. That was also a mistake.
Bella should know by now how Edward feels when she is around JB. Or atleast be sensitive to the situation. But nooOooo she continues to request private conversations. A real Mate would tell JB, if you can't say it with him in the room then don't bother. But nope... we get none of that.
Good story. Bella awakes and acts like Rouge from x-men lol But in her case she has to keep hold onto them. Honestly... I dont see her worth to the volturi.. sure her talent is a rare one but she will literally give them nothing they didn't have before. To my mind, Alice should still be the Golden Goose. That is unless Bellas talent matures and she is able to use the power she has previously copied at a time and place of her choosing. Then it would make sense to want her and or fear her.
Anyway thank you for your contribution.
| TrillionSchiffer chapter 11 . 2/5
What a boring sex life. I dont like reading stories that are very descriptive about lemons. Or worse, stories pretending to be stories but are really all about smut. But these two are newborns and newly mated...yet nothing. All they've done is Read together. Where is the sexual appetite?
| TrillionSchiffer chapter 3 . 2/5
Hmmm... Just a wandering thought. Does it make much sense to tell everyone you are going to Alaska if that is also the place where you are going to start your very secret second life?
| celajwhitney chapter 9 . 3/24/2020
jacob smells like shit? imagine that!
| LadySixx chapter 23 . 7/4/2017
This is a very good story, well thought out and kept me very interested all through it
| TwilightHeavenFanforever chapter 1 . 3/2/2017
Hey. I liked your story so much I did an audiobook for it. It's located at Twilight Fanfic Audio youtube channel. Look under playlist under First Light. Contact me if you life on the business email on that account or simply put a comment on the videos. Christy
| Guest chapter 10 . 9/5/2016
Where is rosalie and emmett?
| Bethan43215 chapter 23 . 5/9/2016
You are very good at this, I read all of your stories in 2 days haha :P you should write more! The way you stick to the characters is awesome !
| jk chapter 16 . 2/24/2016
That whole chapter seemed so out of place...chapter 16 wtf?
| NanaWillbur chapter 4 . 11/6/2015
I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE your writing...Dark Side of the Moon and now First Light, especially chapters 3&4! OMGoodness! I am late catching the Twilight Phenomenon, but wanted you to know I have and that I hope you see this...posted November 6, 2015!
| RubyDee chapter 1 . 1/27/2015
This is beautiful.
| MyladyNancy chapter 22 . 12/13/2014
I just wanted to say thanks for this remarkable story. you are so very talented. i loved every minute of the last few days. good luck on your other adventures and have a happy holiday.
| MyladyNancy chapter 3 . 12/11/2014
I love the Edward you created in this moment. and the relationship of them all. I can't wait to read on.
| BridieM chapter 23 . 4/11/2014
Thank you for a wonderful read. I notice there are other stories that interest me so I will go check them out before too long.i have really enjoyed this story. You have an amazing talent and I hope that you continue to hone it and utilise it. Best wishes. :D
| BridieM chapter 20 . 4/10/2014