Reviews for first light
Reshmi Solaris chapter 10 . 5/18/2008
thia is soo good! i love this story! please continue the story 'til at least five years after bella changes - because you're really good. please update often and please please please give the story a good ending when you do have to end it. but please - don't end it 'til you've written at least five [or ten] years or bella's life after the transformation. because your story is that good!
junayd chapter 22 . 5/18/2008
Kismet40 chapter 11 . 5/17/2008
Bella and Edward's gifts to each other are perfect!
can'tSEEtheSUNanymore chapter 24 . 5/17/2008
This is so good! I love this story!


bookworm8721 chapter 1 . 5/17/2008
OMG. You have got these characters down to the "t." This story is awesome. I almost forgot in the middle of reading it that this is not what stephanie meyer wrote. After reading eclipse, I was about to drive myself crazy because I wanted to know what happens next. After reading this story, I can say that I am content with the outcome until the real story comes out in august. You have done an amazing job.
xXxElianexXx chapter 24 . 5/16/2008
Congratulations. You are truly an amazing writer, and this story was the best BD scenario I have read. Keep going! Again, well done x
Blueflower519 chapter 1 . 5/15/2008
I already can't wait to read more!
dlhk chapter 24 . 5/15/2008
I'm voting as many times as they'll let me. I love that most of my favorite stories are nominated. yeah TMs!
IWillBeThereWhereYouAre chapter 4 . 5/15/2008
it's hard to write a review...when you're a puddle on the Absolutely love it. :)

BTW, love your Edward. Very spot-on.
babaazey chapter 6 . 5/15/2008
wow ... that's all i can say ... just ... wow ...
IWillBeThereWhereYouAre chapter 2 . 5/15/2008
*sigh* That's so cute. I'm already hooked, and it's only chapter two! i'm off to read more...
imprinted one chapter 23 . 5/14/2008
ok first i would like to say that you are a FANTASTIC writer!

This is exactly how i was hoping it all to happen.

i would like to thank you from every fibre in my soul for writing this.

It has been my confort these past few days which it has taken me to read it.

Your attention to all the small details is awe inspiring and you kept the characters true to themselves.

I am honoured that you shared this with us all.
jenniblu421 chapter 23 . 5/14/2008
That was good. I liked having that from Edwards point of view! You are a very good writer!
LionsLamb chapter 2 . 5/14/2008
this rocks!
harem chapter 23 . 5/13/2008
You know in TWILIGHT, when Bella is telling Jessica about the dinner Bella had had with Edward the night before and all she is feeling for him and Jessica, in awe, makes 'wow' sound as though it has three separate syllables? Consider my review a GIANT one of those kind of wows! Really, I'm in awe of your talent and ability. I feel like some of those sentences could be taken straight from BREAKING DAWN. Your writing was so in character of all of them that I was stunned and thrilled. If the fourth book doesn't end up being to my liking, I'm just gonna come back and read this again. It's that good! Thank you for sharing this story.
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