Reviews for first light
bookworm8721 chapter 1 . 5/17/2008
OMG. You have got these characters down to the "t." This story is awesome. I almost forgot in the middle of reading it that this is not what stephanie meyer wrote. After reading eclipse, I was about to drive myself crazy because I wanted to know what happens next. After reading this story, I can say that I am content with the outcome until the real story comes out in august. You have done an amazing job.
xXxElianexXx chapter 24 . 5/16/2008
Congratulations. You are truly an amazing writer, and this story was the best BD scenario I have read. Keep going! Again, well done x
Blueflower519 chapter 1 . 5/15/2008
I already can't wait to read more!
dlhk chapter 24 . 5/15/2008
I'm voting as many times as they'll let me. I love that most of my favorite stories are nominated. yeah TMs!
IWillBeThereWhereYouAre chapter 4 . 5/15/2008
it's hard to write a review...when you're a puddle on the floor...lol. Absolutely love it. :)

BTW, love your Edward. Very spot-on.
babaazey chapter 6 . 5/15/2008
wow ... that's all i can say ... just ... wow ...
IWillBeThereWhereYouAre chapter 2 . 5/15/2008
*sigh* That's so cute. I'm already hooked, and it's only chapter two! i'm off to read more...
imprinted one chapter 23 . 5/14/2008
ok first i would like to say that you are a FANTASTIC writer!

This is exactly how i was hoping it all to happen.

i would like to thank you from every fibre in my soul for writing this.

It has been my confort these past few days which it has taken me to read it.

Your attention to all the small details is awe inspiring and you kept the characters true to themselves.

I am honoured that you shared this with us all.
jenniblu421 chapter 23 . 5/14/2008
That was good. I liked having that from Edwards point of view! You are a very good writer!
LionsLamb chapter 2 . 5/14/2008
this rocks!
harem chapter 23 . 5/13/2008
You know in TWILIGHT, when Bella is telling Jessica about the dinner Bella had had with Edward the night before and all she is feeling for him and Jessica, in awe, makes 'wow' sound as though it has three separate syllables? Consider my review a GIANT one of those kind of wows! Really, I'm in awe of your talent and ability. I feel like some of those sentences could be taken straight from BREAKING DAWN. Your writing was so in character of all of them that I was stunned and thrilled. If the fourth book doesn't end up being to my liking, I'm just gonna come back and read this again. It's that good! Thank you for sharing this story.
magdalena2122 chapter 23 . 5/13/2008
You have a really great sense of the characters! What a lovely diversion... Very fairytale, but that's what I loved about it.
jesslikescoffee chapter 11 . 5/13/2008
I actually just read up to this point tonight, and so far I love the story. I feel Bella is a little too controlled as a newborn, but hey, you never know I guess.

Great story though, and I will most likely finish it tomorrow.
Ine-sama chapter 2 . 5/11/2008
oh my gosh...good story!

when i read the line, "His eyes looked like shiny black pearls," I thought it said "his eyes looked like shiny black PANTS" lol

which of course then i imagined Edward wearing shiny black pants...

yep.
Tigress5cubs chapter 23 . 5/11/2008
Excellent and compelling story. I just finished all of the chapters, the epilogues and the extra chapter. You did it again, blondie. You are amazing.
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