Reviews for first light
sweetswirlypop chapter 22 . 5/10/2008
Such a great story! I'm glad everything went to a full circle, that everyone and everything got their closure. One of the best post-Eclipse fics I've read. And a personal favorite. ;)
Vllyballover chapter 3 . 5/9/2008
Bravo! Well written, and kept me interested til the end. I applaud that you were able to portray the personalities of the characters in a way that fit with how Stephanie Meyer does. However, I will say that i was disappointed by the issues that were built up in New Moon were quickly (and easily) pushed out of the way. Such as the renegotiation of the treaty, Jacob not appearing until the end of the book, and the Volturi being overcome without the effort that you would think would be necessary to take down a coven that has ruled the vampire world for centuries. Overall though, good work and keep it up! :)
ChieriAn9eL chapter 23 . 5/2/2008
You do a good job writing Edward's point of view too. I think you show his vulnerabie side really well... Thanks for writing such a wonderful story! I guess I can finally call it a night now ;)
ChieriAn9eL chapter 22 . 5/2/2008
Aww.. good ending... Closure and coming full circle and all. I will miss this story... it was definitely my favorite post-Eclipse fic. :)
ChieriAn9eL chapter 20 . 5/2/2008
That was a rather unique confrontation. I liked how they kicked butt! And Edward with the lighter? So badass... haha... The whole thing was intense but not too dramatic or dragged out. I'm glad to see that Jane got to suffer, even if her head wasn't ripped off.
ChieriAn9eL chapter 19 . 5/2/2008
I hope I don't sound too giddy... but that was fun! Too bad they couldn't rip Jane's head off too...
ChieriAn9eL chapter 17 . 5/2/2008
Oh wow... anger management indeed... I guess it can't be blamed on PMS anymore... hehe...

That was one freaky vision with Alec's head and all! But now I'm actually excited for them to go to Volterra.. (usually I wouldn't be...)
ChieriAn9eL chapter 16 . 5/2/2008
Nothing really happened, but I felt so sad when Edward kept repeating that he couldn't find her over and over. I always felt that that was a fear deep inside of him, but rarely do we see how much it really means to him to lose Bella... Well, I guess it does happen once in a while in fanfiction, but his fear seemed so much more tangible here. I hope I'm making sense... Bottom line is.. I felt that was a VERY Edward action.
ChieriAn9eL chapter 15 . 5/2/2008
I just checked my email and read your replies.. (this is fun!) ... I feel like this is not the last we've seen of Jane/Volturi.. of course the vision was a big hint... And I agree, the Jacob thing is so closed... I don't know if there needs to be more closure... Maybe they can make peace or something, but I don't think there is any reason to doubt her "choice." It was pretty clear to start with.
ChieriAn9eL chapter 13 . 5/2/2008
I'm glad Rosalie forgave her...once again, good job with the character. And good job showing that not everything will be going as smoothly.
ChieriAn9eL chapter 12 . 5/2/2008
"I’ve waited seventy years to hit that brat with a snow ball." I feel like that is deinitely something Rosalie would say... you did a great job with her character... I'm tired of people making her look like some mean, shallow person with no other personality.. I'm glad they're getting along better.
ChieriAn9eL chapter 10 . 5/2/2008
I always think it's the little lines and details that get to me when I'm reading...And from this one line:“Wow, you were busy.” I can tell you must share my sense of sarcasm. Haha...
ChieriAn9eL chapter 8 . 5/2/2008
oh... that vision about Volterra definitely has my curiosity...
ChieriAn9eL chapter 7 . 5/2/2008
Yup... still reading...

“A cost, yes, but there was never a choice.” I just thought that line stood out because I don't think a lot of post-Eclipse fics point that out enough! :)
lanamoosh chapter 20 . 5/1/2008
Wow! That was fabulous. I've been reading a lot of Twilight FanFic, and one thing that often bothers me is the tendency to make Edward too sappy.. I think you made him as real as Stephenie. He has anger and hurt and joy and love, and you did a great job capturing all. Loved Bella and the gift you gave her. I think the conflict with the Volturri will actually be the ending point in BD, so it won't surprise me if some of the material is similar in a way. Thank you so much for your well-written story!
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