Reviews for first light
jenniblu421 chapter 22 . 3/8/2008
That was very very very good. Thank you.
jenniblu421 chapter 3 . 3/7/2008
Oh my God, I am thrilled by this chapter and can not wait to finish the story!
LindaRoo chapter 22 . 3/7/2008
Aw! I read the whole thing in two days! What a sad but kinda happy...but still so sad of an ending! Wonderful work Blondie!
LindaRoo chapter 21 . 3/7/2008
Yay for graduating from college for the first time!
LindaRoo chapter 20 . 3/7/2008
Yays Bella! Show your power! YAY Bella! No longer a weakling! WOot.
LindaRoo chapter 19 . 3/7/2008
I wonder what Alec's superpower is? We know it's like Jane's, only more intense, and that it's the reason that the Volturi guard is unstoppable. It certainly wasn't perception. LOL
LindaRoo chapter 18 . 3/7/2008
Ooh! Someone's cut off Alec's head

But does that mean that Alec is dead?

Unless it was burned

Unless it was turned

Into ash it would talk to you instead
LindaRoo chapter 17 . 3/7/2008
Hah! Overreacting much? That's usually Edward's job! As someone who writes stuff that I never really want my family to read (only hundreds of random online strangers...hee hee) I can totally sympathize with Bella's feeling. I can see why Edward would be curious too though: every word she writes is a glimpse inside her head.
LindaRoo chapter 16 . 3/7/2008
I do like the idea of Bella being an author. It seem so...her, what with her love of literature and all.
LindaRoo chapter 15 . 3/7/2008
That confrontation went smoother than I expected it to (dude...I was all built up for a fight!), but it was, by far, the tensest of the chapters. I love tension! Again, wonderful use of language. *refreshed by good grammar*
LindaRoo chapter 14 . 3/7/2008
There are few vamps as feared as that Jane

Because she causes people to writhe in pain

Demetri can track

You quite well in fact

Bella and Edward are in trouble that's plain!
LindaRoo chapter 13 . 3/7/2008
Dun dun dun...gotta love those Volturi.
LindaRoo chapter 12 . 3/7/2008
Snowballs. Nice!
LindaRoo chapter 11 . 3/7/2008
Your descriptions of the reactions to the delivery guys are really neat!

The only thing about this whole process that bends my mind a little is how EASY everything has been for Bella so far. I mean...I always eyes for a whole year. Throat bursting into flames when encountering a human to the point of pain that it's like "my hand is on fire. There's a bucket of water. If I don't put it out I will die." She made it seem like a mild discomfort. I DID think that she would be more like Bree, but instead, she still is still pretty much the same ol' human Bella.I didn't think the transition could possibly be that flawless.

But, very much well written, with great use of language! I'm enjoying it!
LindaRoo chapter 10 . 3/6/2008
Wow! Bella's adapting so fast. *chuckles* What ever happened to all that bad luck she used to have? POOF! Gone. Love the happy endings.
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