|Reviews for first light|
| fancygirl44 chapter 10 . 2/3/2008
| Kuro Garyuu chapter 5 . 2/2/2008
I honestly think this was the best wedding scene I have read! You didn't focus on the details (clothes, flowers, etc) like many stories do. You focused on Bella's and Edward's emotions which was so great! :)
| Kuro Garyuu chapter 3 . 2/2/2008
I was on the verge of tears! My eyes were watering! It's so hard to watch/read about others crying! :(
| ReneeSue chapter 22 . 2/1/2008
| selinnium chapter 22 . 2/1/2008
The ending was so sad. I was sniffling by the time I finished. I can not believe Charlie died just like that. It is so tragic. And the really sad song that was playing on the computer doesn't help much either. There is definitely a part of me that wishes Bella can somehow have both Jacob and Edward. I just cannot accept the fact that Bella will outlive Jacob by an eternity and Jacob have no more interest in her. Me and my indecisiveness. But I still love Edward more.
This is the best fanfiction I have EVER, EVER, EVER, EVER read and will probably remain so for a long time. The technical side of the whole story is so perfect; even if there were any flaws, I wouldn't have noticed it. I wonder how long it took for you to edit and refine it. One thing I like best about your writing is the lack of "POVs". It can be so confusing and annoying. Another is the length of each chapter. It makes reading much easier(instead of clicking the purple button at the bottom of each chapter once every 3 minutes). The writing is somewhat similar to Ms. Meyer's as well. It will be hard for me to read the "real" Breaking Dawn as it will probably be so different from this story, especially since I have it engraved in my head I had just finished reading the "real" Breaking Dawn. I absolutely cannot wait for Ms. Meyer's version.
You are such a brilliant writer so keep it up and I hope you continue writing such awesome fan fictions(or your own fiction). I will be eager to read them.
Selena(your #1 fan in
| sami1010220 chapter 22 . 1/30/2008
aw, that's pretty sad. great job on this fic!
| Angeliss chapter 22 . 1/30/2008
That was absolutely beautiful. I'm almost in tears, here. And it isn't really that sad... It's just an end to make way for a new beginning...
| Heartbroken1 chapter 5 . 1/30/2008
A Beautiful Chapter!
One question though... Where is JAsper?
| Heartbroken1 chapter 4 . 1/30/2008
Good girl, Bella... Wedding first.
| Heartbroken1 chapter 3 . 1/30/2008
I'm glad Bella found a ring :)
| Heartbroken1 chapter 1 . 1/30/2008
I'm really intrigued!
Princess Bride is a great movie!
| Heartbroken1 chapter 2 . 1/30/2008
Poor Bella. I'm sure she'll come up with something FABULOUS!
| res cogitans chapter 22 . 1/30/2008
That was brilliant!
perfect and fantastic in every way
I feel like I've read be now lol
I don't feel the need to read it now LOL
The end was so sad. I cried all the way through the last chapter
I think stephanie shpild employ you to write bd lol
| res cogitans chapter 18 . 1/30/2008
I feel like I'm reading breaking dawn already
| Lovebugs chapter 22 . 1/29/2008
I LOVED your story. Thank you very much for sharing it!