Reviews for Take a Shine
E.Cullen1901 chapter 3 . 1/6/2011
can you explain the flashback for me? that confused me a little
E.Cullen1901 chapter 5 . 1/6/2011
awwwwww soooo cute :)
Violet K. Odin chapter 5 . 12/23/2010
Can you explain the flash back to me? Plz?
Sammieexx chapter 5 . 11/29/2010
nice
Twilightfan108 chapter 5 . 5/5/2010
So, is that the end of the story? I think it's a good ending, but, maybe, you could add a few more chapters for me? -does puppy pout-
Vampiregirl1711 chapter 5 . 12/29/2009
I loved the story Rose! The ending made me say "AW!That's SO CUTE!" When I read about Dwayne, I wanted to strangle my computer! Hahahaha JKJKJK! Awesome story, you are an awesome author, girl!
brunettelamb chapter 3 . 7/16/2009
wow love it! what was edward thinking about with the other girl and the car accident?
bluefire022 chapter 5 . 6/6/2009
Aw... such a happy ending! i 3 your story _
Dazzle Me Again chapter 5 . 1/13/2009
So, um, that was kind of, uh, abrupt... the ending I mean.

But the story was great. :)
Belward chapter 5 . 12/21/2008
Kinda rushed, don't you think?

Good plot though...btw could u possibly explain Edward's flashbacks in Chapter3, please?
16TwilightMyLife chapter 2 . 12/9/2008
Awesome!Awesome!Awesome!
16TwilightMyLife chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
Awesome!Awesome!Awesome!
ifairyu chapter 5 . 11/29/2008
awe! what a cute moment! but i though edward had the crooked smile? and in the other chapter when you were on edward POV you kept saying i and he at the same time i think..or was it bella POV where you kept saying i and she? i think it ws bella POV and it was quite confusing...but i loved the story..
omgiwantthisaccounttogoaway chapter 1 . 11/5/2008
its good that rosalie is nice in this story. she would really sympathize for abusive husbands/boyfriends.
hypergirl465 chapter 4 . 10/7/2008
kewl i liked it! except for this one part:

I opened my emerald eyes and raked my fingers through my brown hair in frustration.

i think u meant to write brown but put emerald instead

i just thought i might let u know cuz it kinda confused me.

well either way i liked it! _
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