Reviews for Vulnerable
Raven'sWinterRaine chapter 3 . 3/25/2008
Wow, this is reaaly cool. And let's just say that. . . . . .BEAST BOY IS HOT! AND HE'S ALL MINE! HAHAHAHAHAHAH! -grabs Beast Boy and runs for it- MINE! ALL MINE!
aqua123 chapter 3 . 3/25/2008
First of all, the whole basic idea for this story is great & unique. It's also well written, & you can tell it was well thought out. The only thing I have to say is that it seemed a little rushed at parts during the begining. But then again, I can see why you did it the way you did... omg I'm rambling on now.. [sorry]. But really though, this is the kind of fic that makes you feel like you have no life because you keep coming online just to see if it was updated.. lol. I'm wierd, forgive me. Please update as soon aas you can! ]].
Raven of Alaska chapter 3 . 3/25/2008
Wonderful suit. I wonder how the rest of the Titans will react to Beast Boy's change of clothing. Shock and awe, perhaps? Can't wait to find out!

Sincerely,

Raven of Alaska
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 3 . 3/24/2008
Very cool chapter. BB's narration was quite well done, and so his and Raven's reactions and thoughts.

Pan is a wonderful OC! You need to have her in the story again.

I like the new suit. Cool and still pays homage to BB's classic look.

Keep the good writing.
Laserai chapter 3 . 3/24/2008
I will try to restrain myself . . . . not. This is a fine display of some of the most ingenious and creative writing I have had the privilege of reading in a long time. Not many fanfics have elaborated on Beast Boy ever making a change. They typically write him as being the same carefree boy he was in the series. Its nice to see some of us would like to see him growing up. He can't stay a boy forever right. And don't worry about how the chapter turned out. In my opinion, this story turned out just fine. Nothing was confusing, no unnecessary or repetitive explanations were present like some I have encountered. I particularly liked your Pan character which dare I say seems remarkably similar to another character I have encountered. I got one name: Eva. If you don't know then don't worry about it. If you do, consider it a compliment. I really liked that character as well. I will look forward to your next chapter with great interest. This is just how I expect a golden fanfic rose author to perform. I was not mistaken to put you on that list. You have my devoted support. Carry on. Laserai Out.
ZadZap chapter 2 . 3/1/2008
awsome
CrystalCipher chapter 2 . 2/8/2008
nice
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 2 . 2/4/2008
The green guy is back! Yay!

Great job with all the Titans and their reactions.

Keep the good writing.
Laserai chapter 2 . 2/4/2008
Excellent. The BB and Raven fluff continues. Not enough people concentrate on this couple. I am glad to see at least a few of us can appreciate these two love birds. I hope to see how you further develop their relationship. Character development was well within parameters and interaction was believable. Great development of Raven and Beast Boy and how their age has changed their appearance and overall make up. Also liked the growing and obvious relationship between Robin and Starfire. Finding a match for Cyborg might need to be addressed. How to do that is still something I am grapling with myself. Other then that, this story is looking to be a five star fanfic. No problems to report here. Keep this going. Your doing remarkably well. Laserai Out!
Autumn Scorpia chapter 1 . 2/1/2008
Methinks I like this story...update soon, I'm curious now! XD

Good job!
XX.xXx.AchillezWiplash.xXx.XX chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
o I'm really into this :)
ZadZap chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
WOOT!
Raven of Alaska chapter 1 . 1/29/2008
Wow. I wonder how long the changeling will be gone? Titans Tower won't be the same without him...

Just one thing: I noticed that, i some of the paragraphs, you had a character talk and then another character talk in the same paragraph. My advice to you is separate the paragraphs when characters speak. By the way, this story rocks!

Sincerly,

Raven of Alaska
Nos482reborn chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
this looks good so far, The Beast is always one of my favorite aspects of beast Boy Hyde to his jekyl savage carnivorous, aggressive, and a dont take no $hit from anybody attitude promises to be very interesting story indeed yes..
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
Very good start. Excellent job with BB and his thoughts.

Keep the good writing.
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