|Reviews for Vulnerable|
| acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
Very good start. Excellent job with BB and his thoughts.
Keep the good writing.
| Laserai chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
Well, purplerave. Just when I think you can't set the standards any higher you go and surprise me again. Excellent start to what I perceive to be an instant five star success fanfiction. Very creative and so far never ventured plot and successful character development within acceptable parameters. Overall fanfiction design and flow is also on the ball. So lets see, your rating so far: Plot Line Creativity: 5 of 5, Minimal OOC: 5 of 5, Fanfic Design(Grammar, Spelling, Etc.) 5 of 5. So far as I said before, we got ourselves a five star gold fanfic here. Well, I am looking forward to your next chapter to this. Its looking great so don't change a think. Laserai Out.