Bit creepy this chapter

DAMN incredible story, 9/10 its got some issues here and there but not anything really significant. Good read, fun and please, we want more, I know its been a few years now but we REQUIRE A SEQUEL!

Not really sure what's happening here. You had them tell Sirius back in Hogsmeade, as well as telling James and Lily what his powers from the chamber were, both previous to this chapter.

Now you've repeated it

"She really did fancy him almost to the point of infatuation "

My earlier comments are confirmed, Rose is definitely a narcissist infatuated with an alternate version of herself.

Yep, the whole bunker scene was completely unnecessary and I am pretty sure that I've seen a Grindelwald bunker filled with inferi protecting a horcrux in another story.

Couldn't Harry just flash into the bunker as a phoenix?

So Harry is going to loan her a broom that won't be released for years to come and is letting her fly it in front of a stadium full of people? How is that less suspicious than just buying her a Nimbus?

Having a crush on another version of yourself seems a bit narcissistic but I suppose if they have relations it could be considered masturbation as opposed to incest.

Whoa! Amazing story!

Umu! Adorable start!

Rushed toward the end but decent read overall. I especially liked Rose, she's a (way) better version of Ginny.

The entire reasoning that they have different DNA was nonsense. I guess the author wanted to sugarcoat inbreeding and just wrote whatever plot device they could come up with.

What a train wreck of spelling errors.

The idea of harry and rose together is icky but at the same time i believe that no one is trully worthy of harry, other then himself.

i know we are in 2024 now but i really hope there is a sequel somewhere