A very good story.

I like this plot a lot and since she Phoenix traveled rather than ritual there shouldn't be any more problems. since as he put it they each have their own battery he should follow her back with all his possession marry after she graduates then they can travel the multiverse Phoenix express lots of Potterverse then others could be awesome

I find myself coming back to this story periodically, hoping to see it updated. Maybe one day...

Nice story

What a fantastic story, thank you!

This was amazing

Thanks for a great read. Would love to see the sequel. Sure hope you find your way back to it at some point.

If they were get together, as in a couple. Wouldn't it be incest? Cuz of their genes or something

Yeah sorry but the story got just progressively worse, the end is just pure nonsens and set up for a sequel that never came. Had potential but was wasted by overcomplicating the plot, unnecessary Drama and overambition

yup this is really becoming trash first chapter you tell it was impossible for a legillimens to spy on them and now your reversing it for drama purposes, you know this is a sign of a trash author who keeps reversing his own plot

this chapter is trash and unbelievable

Perhaps they need to flame to another dimension, that one seems to have been lost if the sky was red, and Hogwarts was no more!
Wish you had a happier resolution, for them both. Will every dimension get a rift if they are together? Did she take anything of hers? What of the Potter's portraits? Ah well, if you did have a sequel, I shall take a peek.

Why didn't Harry change what Sirius looked like with Parsel magic when they went to Knockturn Alley? And, I hope that you have a good resolution for their problem in the next two chapters. *crossing fingers*

...prevents the 'fake' from seeing it. -? I'm having a difficult time figuring out what word you meant to put there.

my god this just get worse and worse. this is so incredibly bad