|Reviews for Monster Truck Mayhem|
| theviewfromhere chapter 2 . 1/30/2008
Okay, ready for this? There were just too many thinks I loved, so i'm just gonna make a list: - Your portrayal of the characters, - The way you made the characters so very realistic, - The way you wrote the H/W friendship, - Your fantastic writing style, and finally - You look like you checked your medical facts. (Nothing annoys me more than when people are writing about a medical show, and they screw up on the medical part!)
Good job the second time around. And as always,
| theviewfromhere chapter 1 . 1/29/2008
Whoa, you didn't end it there, did you? It's TBC, right?... Okay. I see there is no Complete sign on it, so, that's a good thing. For a minute there, I actually thought you ended it there, and my heart about stopped.
So, pretty obvious that I liked the story. A lot. And I have to give you credit for not only your fantastic writing style and H/W friendship desription (which I loved), but also your originality. I can honestly say I have NEVER seen a story with a plot quite like this. It's really endearing to see a new, fresh idea out there.
So, keep writing! And update ASAP, please?
(Also, just like to point out a line I particularly liked : 'The sound of splintering wood and crashing metal echoed in his ears as the little shack succumbed to the wrath of Good Year.' Good Year! Love it! Don't know why, but that line made me laugh really, really hard. Thanks for that.)
| iwriterandomthings chapter 1 . 1/29/2008
I cant wait to read more!
| Deleted Account 0702 chapter 1 . 1/29/2008
So glad to see you writing; now I get to review you ;) This is off to a great start! I love hurt!House (obviously, lol) and I love the way you portrayed their friendship in this chapter. I like the way you write and the images you describe (the tire, House's clothing). Interesting to see House getting hurt by something that wasn't his fault, which is really sad to say. God, a monster truck tire. Hope you update soon!
| 2tailswaggin chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
Yay! I still love the little craters left in the dirt from House's cane. The visuals are great...like 'tuna trapped in a fisherman's net'. I love it...and I love your House Wilson friendship!