Reviews for For The Boy Who Has Everything
Gladoo89 chapter 27 . 10/2/2013
Lupin is dowright cruel to Harry! o_o
But my, I'm so glad Snape intervened.
His talk with Harry about the Patronus was just heart wrenching.
Gladoo89 chapter 26 . 10/2/2013
I'm sure Harry is mistaken, Lupin won't die! ;) Will he? o_o
hotcat chapter 28 . 10/2/2013
great story
sweetteatwo chapter 28 . 10/1/2013
was glad to see a new chapter I can't wait to see how Snape is Harry's dad I guess Lily was just easy. please update when you can or was it James.
Lestat Lebrat chapter 28 . 9/29/2013
Hey! I reviewed chapter 26 from my phone but I think it didn't go through! :) This is getting better and better! Harry has his magic back! It's awesome, he was so unhappy without it and I thought briefly that Snape had messed up the potion. Are Draco and Hermione suspicious? Lupin is drinking again? When will he stop being mad at Harry? Were Lupin and Sirius mates like Draco suggested? I can hardly wait for the next chapter! :) Keep up the awesome work!
Schmetterling chapter 28 . 9/28/2013
It always brightens my day to come home from work and see that one of my favorite stories has been updated .
Irishdanceringrulz1776 chapter 28 . 9/28/2013
Great job on this chapter! I think that Harry should have a case of accidental magic happen, as he's no longer used to controlling his magic, and rather powerful besides...
Update soon please!
jazzy2may chapter 28 . 9/28/2013
great chapter. looking forward to the next one. :D
DarkRavie chapter 28 . 9/28/2013
Great chapter! I look forward to reading what happens next.
Penny chapter 28 . 9/28/2013
I AM SO HAPPY YOU UPDATED! I love this story and I can't wait to see how it goes!
Guest chapter 28 . 9/28/2013
Great new chapter!
AmShe256 chapter 27 . 9/27/2013
He forgot to take off his boots. Poor Harry.
Irishdanceringrulz1776 chapter 27 . 9/25/2013
Great job!
Will Harry go into the Chamber? And I think that his Patronus probably has changed... I don't really know what it has changed to, but I think that a lion would be entertaining...
Also, after his birthday, is Harry going to have his magic back? I think that you should add another twist to it, if that's the case... You should make it be so strong, so suddenly, that Severus decides that Lily, knowing Harry would be strong, magically, had placed charms on him that sort of pulled his magic away from him... And they've been acting crazy lately...
And then you could have Harry have a problem with control of his magic, which would be interesting, although he could then maybe learn wandless magic at this point...
Guest chapter 27 . 9/24/2013
Great story. I find myself wishing very much that Professor Snape does not die in this version and that Hadrian and Harry can be friends with Draco. Keep up the good work!
Alexandra Love chapter 27 . 9/24/2013
The way I'm reading this, Hermione is putting Draco up to interrogating/entrapping Harry, somehow. I don't think Draco could have been so accurate in pin-pointing the things Harry would get the most upset about, without some insider info. Ha! Snape stole the book from under McGonagall's nose! And then he made Harry and Draco look for it! That's hilarious! The whole patronus thing was so well done. It wasn't done well at all in canon, with the whole moping Tonks garbage. Here it makes actual sense. You did that in a couple of places, actually, like questioning why Sirius was able to inherit anything if he was disowned. I like that you're using canon things, but going deeper and trying to explain why something might work that way. Oh, and the patronus is a really good point, because how in hell will Harry explain PRONGS popping out of HADRIAN'S wand? He either better get a new patronus or pray he never runs into any Dementors. Lupin drinking makes sense. The way he acted the night Harry arrived at Grimmauld Place is pretty close to how he acted toward Harry in this chapter. Drinking apparently makes him mean. Maybe takes away his ability to put on his "mild mannered" persona. Well, that's my review. I thought this chapter was really interesting, though I'm kind of longing for more "action" in the story. More danger or something. The chapters with Fudge were really tense and you write action scenes well. Harry needs to go break into the Chamber of Secrets and find out the basilisk laid three hundred eggs or something!
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