Reviews for At the Train Station
xXpiex chapter 5 . 7/29/2011
lololol 1,000,000 24-karat diamond ring. hahahahahahaha i so want one O.O but really boys ... T.T so not going for one right now :)
Little-Miss-Shy-Girl chapter 5 . 2/11/2009
sweet

update soon
Little-Miss-Shy-Girl chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
great

natsume is ooc
SleepyKlutz chapter 1 . 11/11/2008
Um... the story was intersting... the begining of the plot was original but the end and the way it was written was simply put... horrible. Im not flaming you or anything but it was too fast paced and sometimes didnt make sense AT ALL! Also there was a racist comment in the first chapter living in a trailer truck, like koreans? WTF! Since when do koreans live in trailer trcks? Maybe North Koreans but NOT south koreans So PLZ change that, it is insulting (Im korean(south), BTW)and the fact that the whole story is in dialogu is simply... weird and Mikan AND Natsume VERY OOC! I think thats all... Hope you improve ypur writing skills
natsumecraver chapter 5 . 10/26/2008
aww.. the ending is very cute!
Leafless chapter 5 . 6/10/2008
..wow!.the story is sweet..i like it!
AYUMU10 chapter 1 . 5/28/2008
its nice but u made it too fast u could have it atleast in many chapters
sweetypie17 chapter 5 . 3/1/2008
nice fic... i had fun reading it...
Echo In The Night chapter 5 . 2/6/2008
love it
Akemi831Sato chapter 5 . 2/5/2008
Are you a filipino?so i am!I love your story!
rObOt pRiNcEsS chapter 5 . 2/4/2008
wow!

the ending is so kawaii!

it's really good!

i love it!

congratulations and keep up the good work!
lizziichu chapter 5 . 2/3/2008
ang saya! pero medyo corny ung ending.. pero okay na rin.
Happy-Go-Round chapter 5 . 2/2/2008
Wow...that was quick...

Anyhow, it was OOC on my opinion but I liked it anyway. Nice story!
miamachi chapter 4 . 2/2/2008
please... if u appreciate the story... just appreciate it. I DONT NEED FLAMES. yeah, maybe there are REALLY critics but, can u just send it to me PRIVATELY? u know, its really not ur business guys if i use tgalog. i dont care for those who can't understand it. I AM AN AMATEUR WRITER. please? but, i'm still glad u liked this story. Thanks guys.
natsumifan chapter 5 . 2/2/2008
that was an awesum story

i hope u write a sequel

im ur fan now

well hope you continue writing

ja
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