Reviews for Conceit's Original Sin
satomika chapter 11 . 3/13/2008
woohoo!

that's so cool...

but i'd rather have the excitement when there are lots of blood gushing out...

mwahahahahahahahaha!

or rather more scenes from ToFuu!

heeheeheeheehee!
Ushinaware Ta Kaze chapter 11 . 3/13/2008
Yay! So u finally decided to continue! The fight sounds really interesting...so update fast!
asianpearl chapter 11 . 3/12/2008
whoa.. though i'm surprised they're not fighting kurei... But you've made it interesting all the same.. I enjoy the dramatic bits in this story.. and i hope there will be many more to come.
mikaro chapter 11 . 3/11/2008
we...thanks for the gratitude :) ehehehe...

nice...reminds me of the urabatousatsunjin :D GO MI_CHAN! :D

what's kushiel all about? :)

update!
eirist chapter 11 . 3/11/2008
waah! the fight. finally. i hope there's more action in the next chapter ;). will kurei and fuuko fight? i can't wait for the outcome!
lovemeloveme chapter 10 . 3/11/2008
wohoo~! that's what i'm talkin 'bout!
satomika chapter 10 . 2/26/2008
whahahahahahahahahahahahhaha!

i never thought you could be that perverted...

whahahahahahahahha!

how old are you anyway...

could you be older than me?

heeheehee...

anyway...

the atmosphere really felt heated...

demo...

don't worry about not portraying as much as emotion as you wanted too...

as long as the though is there...

and the both of us are the same...

i've never been in love and perhaps, never will...

never got a first kiss, and maybe never will i...

i kinda feel sick when that thought comes into my head...

i mean when it's gonna happen to me...

it's okay if other people would do that...

but not me...

and yeah, never had, and never will i have a sexual intercourse with someone else!

it seriously is scary...

i don't want kids anyway...

they're so annoying just like my siblings...

i don't think i'm gonna get married anyway...

by the way, my review for the other chapters are included here...

sorry for not reviewing immediately...

we had a three-day vacation and i don't have the time to go out...

our computer at home is busted...

heeheehee

ja!

please update soon!
mikaro chapter 10 . 2/26/2008
wow...wooho...heated passion...we...Fuuko still has not realized her feelings for Mi-chan? She must soon! :P
mikaro chapter 9 . 2/26/2008
domo :) keep up the good work :)
asianpearl chapter 10 . 2/25/2008
yay! an entire chapter of tofu-ness.. it sounded yummy.. haha
m chapter 10 . 2/25/2008
that was hot...and they did it in kurei's mansion...pervy me..haha!;P

very nicely done! it's like i can feel the emotions they were feeling...love it!

i'll be waiting for the update then...

keep writing!:D
Eirist chapter 10 . 2/24/2008
that was really fast... it was just a while ago when i was reading your chapter nine. oh my... i love this chapter! i love you so much! wahh! i am such a pervert too. hehe! it was really good. i love the way you described what's happening between them... whoa! update soon! i would love to read the fight between kurei.
Eirist chapter 9 . 2/24/2008
whoa! i loving kurei here! ruthless! i can't wait. survival of the fittest. i can't wait!
tetsutakatarai chapter 9 . 2/24/2008
pls update soon.
lovemeloveme chapter 9 . 2/24/2008
whatever made you think of quitting? Well, please update soon.
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