Reviews for Carnival
kaput chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
The imagery is fantastic. I like Ben's hidden person. I like that Juliet is in denial, but you say it so subtly. In general, this is a lovely bit of fic. Thanks for sharing! :-)
Shiro Ryuu chapter 1 . 1/29/2008
I love you forever. It's so very short, but there's just so 'much' there. Fluff, of course, plus the most amazingly bizarre mental image EVER of a ferris wheel in the middle of a tropical jungle... most of all, though, I like the concept of Ben revealing 'the person he usually keeps hidden', because it ties in perfectly with the whole carnival tradition of normal things turned up-side down and inside out, and adds SO much depth to those six little sentences. *spazzes like the geeky English-anthropology-y person she is*