Reviews for Not A Gamble
francis2 chapter 14 . 2/20/2011
Hi p-a-l, please continue this story. It might not need much to be finished and wrapped up. I really enjoyed the twists and turns of the story.
jameni chapter 12 . 6/12/2010
This story was great up to chapter 11 or 12-then it sort of flatten out and ended up being a mix max without any plot itself was great and it really could have worked but something happened that made the story itself get either way;thank you for sharing...I hope you will at some point be able to fix the ending!
Redlioness62 chapter 15 . 6/8/2010
I don't mean to be rude, but for me this entire story made no sense whatsoever. Maybe I am just a stickler for a least stick to the character tru nature, but AU - alternate universe, was a little too fantastical for me.
wildcatgirl101 chapter 15 . 5/31/2008
wow sarah and mick had a thing going on? it's really good
moonjat54 chapter 15 . 4/12/2008
Well that was surprising. There is a lot of mending that is going to have to happen. A lot of explaining I think.
scrappyearnhardt chapter 15 . 4/12/2008
Redlioness62 chapter 12 . 3/25/2008
Redlioness62 chapter 13 . 3/25/2008
moonjat54 chapter 13 . 3/23/2008
Well that chapter was correctly named. Didn't see that coming. Just read this and now that I'm all caught up I'm intrigued. What will you do next? Can't wait.
scrappyearnhardt chapter 13 . 3/22/2008
RandomTVFan30 chapter 12 . 3/21/2008
Interesting but yet confusing. Like to see what you are heading towards.

I say confusing since we are jumping back and forth it sort of getting the story into a bad jumble.
xosummerxo chapter 12 . 3/21/2008
good chapter. continue
scrappyearnhardt chapter 12 . 3/21/2008
RandomTVFan30 chapter 11 . 3/15/2008
Oh I'm relieved that Beth is ok. The end kind of confused me but I figured out you were refering to Josef going to New York.
scrappyearnhardt chapter 11 . 3/15/2008
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